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  • ThePoeChick
    7 years agoReply
    Gorgeous. Enjoy the simple lines, not to much clutter. Leaves the poem for greatness. Enjoyed it! Good luck!
    Nymph
    Nymph
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    An Entry By Unitee. Funny, this is the first poem I've written on here!
  • ThePoeChick
    7 years agoReply
    Enjoy your concept! Enjoy the explanation of the water! I agree with your position on its cleansing factor! Good luck!
    A Sea of Dew
    A Sea of Dew
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    Just something I composed. It's poetic, a bit nerdy and hopefully unique. For the National Poetry contest. Please Like/Fave/Comment. I will really appreciate it
    Rohini N
    7 years ago
    Did you enjoy it? Or are you telling others to enjoy?
    ThePoeChick
    7 years ago
    I enjoyed it :)
  • ThePoeChick
    7 years agoReply
    Lovely! Very new idea to rain and the sounds surrounding such ideas.
    The Wonders Of Water
    The Wonders Of Wat...
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    This is for the National Poetry Day competition. The poem inside, is well as the title and competition page states, about water. ENJOY!!!
    EuphoniumGal
    7 years ago
    Ha thanks do you have one you want me to check out?
  • ThePoeChick
    7 years agoReply
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    Parallel sentences are great, enjoy the small bit of personification of the water. For criticism- I would play with some imagery sometime! Overall nice poem! Keep up the great work!
    I Beg A Drop
    I Beg A Drop
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    This is an entry for a 24-hour-poetry competition about WATER! THIS ENTRY IS ONE OF THE 6 WINNERS OF THE 24-HOUR-POETRY COMPETITION! I AM PROUD OF MY WORK AND REALLY, THANK GOD FOR THIS AND THANK...
    VemJ
    7 years ago
    Sure sure and really thanks!!! :D
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