FemaleUnited StatesMember since 4 Aug 13Last online 7 years ago

LWWY

  • TeenageD1rtbag
    This is exactly like After...
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    Cassie wasn't you average good collage girl. She got the grades, She worked hard, had the support of her family. However she works in a nightclub, on Saturday nights. One night brings her to Harry Styles,...
  • TeenageD1rtbag
    How do you manage to write an amazing story like this?! Experiences? It's just awww! Unfair.
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    She asked what love felt like, she got the answer that "it feels like pink", then she knew.
  • TeenageD1rtbag
    In this story they just list stuff. More Specific Details and this story would be perf!!
    She's not just a maid..
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    Lily's a 19 year old college student living alone in an apartment in London. She works as a part-time maid for some rich peoples mansion. She has never met the home owners though. What happens when she...
    TeenageD1rtbag
    7 years ago
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    Well I really like it but you just list the events and don't explain enough. It's probably because you use so many pov.'s I'd just stick to one person, and explain there feelings. It'd make it better than it already is!;)
    xoceleseox
    7 years ago
    Okay! Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it!!! And I'll try too next time!!!(:
    TeenageD1rtbag
    7 years ago
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    Thank you and honestly I'm surprised you actually answered me! Wow! :D
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