FemaleMember since 8 May 13Last online 7 years ago

Hi!!! Erm... I have loved to write ever since I can remember. I have eight brothers, and a cat, two dogs, and three mice. If you fan me, I'll fan you back!!!

  • plzmummy
    7 years agoReply
    It's gonna be interesting to see how you unravel this plot. Using letters is such an imaginative idea. :)
    First para: Awesome, except maybe don't say "she looked amazing"; instead, show us more. Maybe tell us how the dark dress complimented her pearly skin or whatever.
    Second para: Nice phrasing. You can really feel his emotions.
    Third para: Snap with the last one, but conveying a different emotion.
    Fourth para: Flawless.
    Fith para: I really love the phrase "tears poisoning my cheeks." You have such a unique style with your writing. Also, I don't know if this still applies when writing a letter, but put the dialogue on a new line, each time a new person speaks.
    You're writing kinda in second person as well, which is fascinating to read.
    Loved it! :D Lots of emotion.
    Letter Line
    Letter Line
    450
    11
    12
    A series of letters, to different people, from different people, but all connected. In this unravelling romance tale.
    plzmummy
    7 years ago
    1 Like
    Also a well deserved fan from me. :P
    plzmummy
    7 years ago
    Ah okay. My mistake, and no problemo. :P
  • plzmummy

    Hey I'm New

    7 years agoReply
    Well hi! Erm... any advice? :P
    Ms Holly
    7 years ago
    LOL Mitchell!
    Hi, I'm very pleased to meet you! Just call me LMH, or Bry. It's your choice. Need any help, just let me know.
    JCesq
    7 years ago
    Well, hullo there! I'm sort of newish here too so if you need anything go to those above me, They're good people. However, if you just want somebody to talk to, a buddy, or something of the sort, I'm always here (though I do have my perks).
    whale.butt
    7 years ago
    Hello :) I joined like three months ago, but it doesn't even seem that xD
    Everyone on here is so friendly, and you will always find someone to talk to if you are bored. Movellas is a pretty good site, the second writing site I've been on and the first to actually see my books become a little popular. I'm sure you will like it on here, and as I said before, there are plenty of people to talk to :)
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