Lucifer's Kiss
Through Dead EyesJust love people. You never know when they'll disappear
6 years ago

  • Lucifer's Kiss
    HI,
    So far it looks and sounds really interesting. But there is one thing I'd like to comment on. Every sentence or every sentence when some one is speaking you add a - and in many way that isn't needed and cutting it would really save you when writing.
    If it's a new speaker then the sentence can go without a - and it makes it easier and less annoying for the reader.
    Killer Love (Jeff The Killer)
    Killer Love (Jeff...
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    We know those myths about the "Creepypasta" characters,we also know that they are not real,or well,that's what Devonne White,a 16 year old girl,used to think.What will happen when she gets to see all of...
    Killer_Queen28
    6 years ago
    Oh! Okay,thank you! :)
    Lucifer's Kiss
    6 years ago
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    Just thought it would help you out a bit more:)
  • Lucifer's Kiss
    The hell has I not checked this out before? I am so sorry. I have been missing out so bad.
    Dark Angel
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    Being the daughter of a dark angel and a human leaves you with little choice but to become evil. To deify it will bring you face to face with the original fallen angel. Along with her friend Ralph, Valerie...
    Skylar Black
    6 years ago
    There is no need to be sorry Kiss :)
    You haven't been missing out on much...yet.
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