MaleUnited KingdomMember since 29 May 13Last online 5 years ago

This is more a "let's see how this goes" than anything else. I adore words and gorgeous writing, so it'll be interesting to read your comments on my writing, mainly to see if I harbor even the slightest faculty for it.

  • Jordan C.

    mumbled "Let me know if I'm any good?"

    5 years agoReply
    My friend at work was at one point an aspiring writer, however his passions were sidetracked when he had children. So I thought if we had a little competition between the two of us to write a short story, it may reinvigorate his passion and aspirations. If not, it would be the first piece of fiction I've written and it may spark a love for it. I write a diary every night and explore and experiment with language and words (sometimes delving into the pleonastic or ridiculous) and I adore it. For reference, this is not the entire short story, only a segment of it and I'm curious as to whether or not it's any good. I am one whom appreciates criticism. Honestly, if you think it's eye-popping garbage...tell me!
    DrowningMy friend at work was at one point an aspiring writer, however his passions were sidetracked when he had children. So I thought if we had a little competit...
    DragonSoulJess
    5 years ago
    I'll definitely check it out! :)
    It might be a while since I'm currently planning out my character's backstory, but hopefully I'll get some feedback done by the end of this weekend. :)
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