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  • HellHoundQueen

    mumbled "New Story-Mafia Love plot"

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    Thinking of a new story idea here's the plot. Tell me what you think.

    Ariana was an ordinary girl working a 9-5 job. One day while at the gym she is kidnapped by the mafia. She soon meets the mafia boss and soon has the ability to roam the fenced in estate shes at. She soon develops feelings for the boss. But what happens when shes given a choice? Will she choose to stay or will she leave and return to her old life?
    Midnight Rogue
    3 weeks ago
    What you're plot suggests is that you seek to write a story based off something called Stockholm Syndrome. I would recommend you research into this as well as the way a cult might manipulate a desperate person into falling for them. I think it could be a good story though, and you could really raise awareness to these issues if you present them correctly.
    Midnight Rogue
    3 weeks ago
    Ooh, also research the specific mafia, triad or mob you're looking to write about.
    HellHoundQueen
    3 weeks ago
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    Thank you.
  • HellHoundQueen

    mumbled "I hate fighting"

    Fighting with people or hearing it makes my anxiety rise up at least 5 noches and im trying not to cry and my breathing goes crazy. My body tightens like im being wrapped up by a snake. I can't take my dad and stepmom fighting i dont want my dad and her to fall apart. That means one thing for my dog that he would have to go to someone else. I don't have another home for him or my brothers dog to go to. I just can't take being stuck hearing this fighting all because a 3 year old was never taught to leave shit alone all because his sisters let him touch their things.
    Midnight Rogue
    1 months ago
    Unfortunately, that's how siblings/step-siblings are sometimes. I'm really sorry that your going through this, but sometimes there's little more that you can do than just vent :/ and I guess that's why you'll always have this. If you can, try to spend more time at school or the library, or go for walks. Or, if you feel like you can, confront your dad and your step-mum about how all this arguing is making you feel. But I know that I always use to just avoid home when I could when I became anxious or upset.
    HellHoundQueen
    1 months ago
    Thanks for the advice you're a great person for it. *hugs*
    Midnight Rogue
    1 months ago
    You're very welcome :) and I hope things get better for you <3 And if you need to talk, the community is always here for you.
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