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  • HarrylovesAshley
    I like your plot but you need to write longer sentences. You just say details like. Then he did this. Also when you are writing diologue make sure you put these marks " so it's a lot less confusing. Write on!
    One Direction Kidnapped  Me
    One Direction Kidn...
    What will happen to Alexis when she finds out she's been kidnapped by One Direction?
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