• Fleeting Shadows
    This poem really isn't that great. The rhyme scheme is very simple but the comparisons in the forms of metaphors are too unassoc iated I don't understand why any of your poetry gets the comments they do
    Broken Heart
    Broken Heart
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    *Poetry Competition* The Girl With A Broken Heart... Copyright (C)
  • Fleeting Shadows
    Nice idea. Decent detail. But the the rhyming was to forced
    The Sea and Me
    The Sea and Me
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    This is a poem I have written for 'The BIG Poetry Competiton'. So please open your hearts, like, fave and comment. Thank You. Copyright (C)
  • Fleeting Shadows
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    Umm this isn't the greatest . M ore elaboration on war and trees is needed. It's not really in poetic condition but keep trying
    Stuck in the middle
    Stuck in the middl...
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    A poem from the point of view from a tree in a war ground and what it see's. This is a competition entry so please like, fav and comment :)
    Nightstitched
    7 years ago
    this is the most liked poem on movellas, I know thats not everything but she deserves more respect than "umm this isn't the greatest." And it not in poetic condition maybe you should look up free verse. you don't need rhyme or rhythm to make a poem.
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