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Would love to one day make a career out of writing, but in the meantime I'm just going to keep on doing it for fun.

Happy to read and give feedback to anyone in return for the same :)

  • EvergreenKnight
    Really enjoyed reading this and I hope it does well in the competition! I thought it was a really original idea (I liked how you used mythology and Latin and invented your own things too!) and the descriptions were really vivid and gave me a perfect picture of what you were trying to describe! Will definitely read the longer version when I have time :)
    Life After Living (shortened version)
    Life After Living...
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    (Afterlife Competition) There are three dimensions that coincide to make the sacred bond of existence. Para. Terra. Infernum... 'I died so why aren't i in heaven? or hell? Or anywhere?'
    LOL_ANGEL
    6 years ago
    Thanks a lot, it's really encouraging to know you like it enough to read the longer version :D
  • EvergreenKnight

    Looking for advice

    Hi everyone! Just published my first ever story on here and would love to know what you all think! Happy to read and comment for anyone generous enough to do the same for me!
    Mina Rowen ☕
    6 years ago
    Sure, I'm reading your story right now. Could you read my story and comment in return? Here's the link:
    In Love and WarTruths were bitter. Truth. Sophie was dead. Truth. I was not going to be happy for a long time. Truth. I was going to be sent far far away. After...
    EvergreenKnight
    6 years ago
    Sure - I'll give it a read this evening and leave you a comment with my thoughts :)
  • EvergreenKnight
    Really enjoyed this - doesn't matter that it's short when the descriptions and ideas are so good! Keep it up :)
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    I'm blind. Consumed by a blackness that seems to reach the unfathomable corners of the Earth. I am injured. But i can't feel the pain. I am not alone. But my companion is dead. But then- i'm Bounced.
    TheFuzz
    6 years ago
    Thanks! I have to finish it tomorrow XD
  • EvergreenKnight
    Just entered my first ever Movella for this! If anyone wants to read and give feedback I'd be happy to read yours in return! Good luck to everyone in the competition :D
    EvergreenKnight
    6 years ago
    Of course! I'll let you know what I think :)
    Ecgun
    6 years ago
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    Truth after Death.(Afterlife Competition) What happens when we die? Do who go down in Hell or up to heaven? Do we come back to Earth as ghost? or Do we witness punishment...

    I'll read yours :)
    EvergreenKnight
    6 years ago
    Thanks :) If there's anything of yours you'd like me to read in return then just let me know!
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