FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 21 Feb 12Age 19Last online 3 days ago

hello I'm an overly enthusiastic piece of trash

If you're going to be really awesome and read any of my work, I'd suggest the following:
-When the World Falls to Darkness (if you're into longer fantasy stuff)
-Red and Silver or A Melody of Greed and Love (if you're into fairy tales and are looking for shorter stories)
-Head and Heart (if you're looking for some dystopian stuff)

I assure whoever has managed to make it this far that I am really quite friendly, and if you would like any help I would be happy to give it. :D

Jess bids you farewell.
For now.
Unless her invisible friend eats you, which is an entirely likely scenario.

(my profile description is a mix of little bits written over the last few years and it's a MESS but that's symbolic of my life, so)

  • DragonSoulJess
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    ALL OF THE NEW ART IS JUST !!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH IT'S SO GOOD I'M IN CONSTANT AWE LIKE ?? HOW DO YOU KEEP IMPROVING, WHO DID YOU SELL YOUR SOUL TO FOR THESE SKILLS????? <3 <3 <3
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    These are all the drawings I did based on my own books. As you can see, I'm an egomaniac, hence this one's the biggest. I do love my characters.
    Jem Wakefield
    1 months ago
    Thank you!!! I'm in constant awe of your kindness?? <3 <3 <3

    Also, the Devil. I sold my soul to the Devil.

  • DragonSoulJess
    Ahhh I'm unhealthily obsessed with les mis so I'm gonna message you so I don't fill up everybody else's notifs but AHHHHH YAY, who's your fave character?? :D
    Midnight Rogue
    3 weeks ago
    XD I love Eponine. I haven't read the book yet, actually, it's still on my reading list.
    DragonSoulJess
    3 weeks ago
    yeah, she's amazing! <3 and oooh yes I'd recommend!! It's so long though ahh :')
    Midnight Rogue
    2 weeks ago
    XD I'll have to pick it up at some point. I'm currently getting through Neil Gaiman's Norse Mythology

    Maybe after that :)
  • DragonSoulJess
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    !!!! THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AHHH <3 your imagery is still absolutely PERFECT - 'The clock is kind, as guards go', 'lazy lightning', the words rambling freely, etc., is all so amazing ahhhhhhhh
    As for how to improve it, this is suuuuuper super picky, but something my creative writing tutor said about was cutting down on some of the imagery to make the very best bits stand out even more? But honestly that might not apply to this piece because it reads as very poetic prose anyway, so definitely keep it if you like it!! <3 (Kind-of linked but if you take out 'stickily' from the bit about flies, I thiiiink it reads a bit more powerfully (since 'stickily' is implied anyway through the rest of the imagery, if that makes any sense??)? But also slightly less poetic because you lose the alliteration? So ahh that might be something to consider?

    But overall this is SO SO AMAZING AHHHHHH and the image of the waiting deluge throughout??? BEAUTIFUL?? I'm sure your girlfriend will love it!! <3 :D
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    Mirlotta
    1 months ago
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    JESS I SWEAR I LOVE YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH !! <3 <3 <3
    I totally agree with your creative writing tutor tbh, I might add in a bit more generic non-imagery stuff (because I can't bear to kill any of the metaphors hahahahaha they're my children) and also yeah I agree about the stickily thing too, thank you!
    Also..... how are you??? How was your first year at uni?? (Warwick, right??) it's so cool that you're getting to actually study creative writing, you're living the DREAM mannn
    DragonSoulJess
    1 months ago
    AHHHHH NO PROBLEM <3 <3
    Yeah, I tend to use waaaaaay too much imagery haha :') AND YESSSSSS THE METAPHORS <3
    Yeah, Warwick!! It's been so amazing so far?? And the tutors are SO GOOD AHH I love them :') How's college? And what are your post-college plans ahhh?? :D :D
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