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7. The Realm- @Alias Koya

Hey, Im sooo sorry that this is so late. I read this before but then I got busy with state testing, getting my permit, and other things. Really sorry! 

Ok so about your story. 

 

I love your time line and your characters! I love kai and Alexer, and Mortel! I also love your idea and creativity with all of the things that you created and such. I like how you started the book and how you introduced Alexer. 

I had a hard time reading chapter 2, Im not sure why, but when I finished reading all of the book and started writing this I realized that this is just something that I normally would not red, so it isn't anything to have to do with your writing. 

I think that you could do with a few more details and move a little slower. That's just a suggestion though, you do fine with out it. 

 

Pros- characters, plot and your timeline

Cons- your pace and your details. 

 

All in all this is a story that I will follow as long as you continue it! It is an amazing story and hopefully you continue it! 

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