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20. The Proposition by Layla Little Owl


My Opinion:

So far I am really liking the story. I haven't finished the book, but I am on chapter 12 and I am definitely going to finish it. I really like how you don't rush into the story, having Alex have feelings for Evan after he confesses his feelings for her. I like how it's difficult for her to see Evan in a different way than she already does because of her anger. It's one of my pet peeves when people jump so quickly into the story and you haven't done that so far. 

You have little minor errors throughout the book, just punctuation errors, but there isn't anything else that I found.

I'm most definitely going to be finishing the story. It's really good and I'm enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work!

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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