Zireee's Story Review (RE-OPENED)

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12. Tear Drops by Amaan.s_official


My Opinion:

I completely understand everything. Not so much about losing friends and having your parents judge them, but with feeling completely alone and wanting them to understand but it's like they don't want to. It's very frustrating and it feels like the only person that can understand is you.

I'm sorry that you lost a close friend. I lost a close friend over some ridiculous shit and even though we were best friends for six years, I don't want to be friends with her because she always caused drama. I do miss being friends with her though.

I hope that it will get better for you. I honestly feel you on this one.

This was a great poem. I like how honest it is.

You do have some punctuation errors, like apostrophes but other than, I didn't see major errors.

You're a wonderful writer Amaan. Keep up the great work!

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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