Zireee's Story Review (RE-OPENED)

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18. Survivors by Amaan.s_official

My Opinion:

I like it. There isn't really much for me to say about it. The first chapter and the description of it says this is what I want to say to certain people. I'd probably change the title, "Thoughts to You" or "This Is For You". That's what I would do.

You don't seem to have any errors which is good. If there's more, continue it. If not, you should probably change the status to COMPLETE.

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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