Zireee's Story Review (RE-OPENED)

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4. Secrets by #Vampire in training

My Opinion: 

I really like this story. It's a little confusing, though, because first you're talking about one place and then you automatically start talking about something completely different. You also have some grammar and punctuation errors, but that can be easily fixed. One way to make your story really interesting is put the title and your Pen Name on your cover. I find stories interesting when they have the title on their covers. Keep up the good work, I'm really liking it!

-Zireee

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