Zireee's Story Review (RE-OPENED)

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16. Runic- Heart of Spoils by jubjubird

My Opinion:

Okay...

This one completely threw me off from the last one. I was not, at the least bit, expecting that AT ALL.

I've only read one chapter because I had to review this now. I was expecting another soft story, but not this one. I think I'm in love with your style of writing... it switches which is good. Also, I think I'm in love with Zafar too, except he has a wife which is sad... I'm probably better looking than she is anyways. *flips hair*

I'm sitting so close to my laptop, as my eyes go back and forth across the screen, lol. My mom told me like two or three times to back up because it's not good for my eyes.
"Zire, back up from the screen! I'm not buying you any glasses!"

Of course, you didn't have any errors which is good. Your proofreading must be on point.

I'm definitely finishing the rest because it's just so incredibly good. I'm just... a round of applause from me!

Please continue, I need more. Btw, I liked and favorited it. You deserve it. I'm surprised you don't have like 4,000 views on it. Maybe it's because everyone prefers the usual stories- fanfictions on celebrities when they should be trying something completely different like this.

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

-Zireee

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