Time to choose // Dolan Twins Fan Fiction

Your a 17 year old girl named Neeve and you had a really hard decision to make. Move to LA or London, you followed your heart and ended up doing something you never imagined.


17. Chapter Seventeen

We got out of the car and I took a look at the view. How can someone make something like this. It's beautiful like magic. I feel butterflies around my stomach when I saw the Cinderella tower was to die for. I wish I could be a little girl again because my reaction would be ten times more rememberable then anything in the world.

I looked over to Grayson to see he had the biggest smile on his face. Seeing his reaction to me made me smile ten time bigger.

"You ready" Grayson said holding his hand out infront of the Disney entrance.

"Ready has ill ever be" I said grabbing his hand and running like a madman.



"You look like your about to turn into lava" Grayson chuckled while touching my head pretending that I burnt his finger.

"Your an idiot" I said play bunching his arm. He pretended to be hurt again. He's such a dork.

Finally we were at the beginning of the line. Just so everyone knows. This was just to get in. Not any rides just so we can get in. LIKE BITCH PLEASE.

We got in and we got a brochure so we can tell where all of the rides were but before we do anything. I. MUST. MEET. MICKEY. MOUSE.

He doesn't get seen often so I must meet him.

Though there were some detours on the way.

I met Cinderella and goofy.

"Do you want to go on a ride?" Grayson asked.

"Sure Grayson" I said. " Can I go on your back"

"Sure jump on" he said quoting down so I can jump on.

One I did I think I broke all of his ribs but that's okay right. "Do you want to go on the Matterhorn?" Grayson asked.

What the fuck is a Matterhorn. It honestly sounds like a horn that matters a lot.

"Sure, what is it" I asked. He put me down from the piggyback.

"So it a really big mountain with a yeti in it and it's a scary roller coaster ride" Grayson explained.

"I don't like scary things remember" I said starting to shake of just the thought of it.

"Don't worry, I've been on this ride so many times. I'll look after you I promise" he said squeezing my hand making me feel better.

"Thank you" i said putting my head on his shoulder while he put his hand on my waist pulling me closer.

We started to walk and I saw the mountain. You honestly can't miss it. I'm scared that I'm going to make a huge fool out of myself.

We got to the line and it was huge

"Do we really have to wait" I sighed

"No, I know a guy" Grayson said smiling.

The man Grayson was talking about told us to follow him which we did and we went to the front of the line. Finally.

"If you new someone why did we have to wait to get in?" I asked and he smiled.

"So I could spend some more time with you" Grayson said while blushing.

"Your sweet" I said holding his hand and we got on the ride.

"Make sure you keep your arms and leg in at all times" we heard the man say.

I'm literally shitting my pants right now.

We started slow... okay.... this is good...... SHIT WHAT WAS THAT MOTHER FUCKING NOISE.

Grayson could tell I was tensing up so he held my hand tighter.


"Shh.... don't curse. There's kids" Grayson and and I blushed in embarrassment.

"SWEET MOTHER OF JESUS CHRIST MY LORD AND SAVIOUR" I screamed and hiding myself in Grayson's arms.

"Okay. Just curse cause I swear you can never say what you just said" he said embarrassed.

"Sorry" I said looking away.

We speed up a lot and seeing all the Yeti's actually made me shit myself. Like why bitch.


The ride ended and thank fuck it's over.

My head is dizzy and I'm scared for fucking life.

Damn I probably should stop swearing.


We got out and I swear I probably died for a second.

"How was it?" Grayson asked.

"We are never doing that again" I said trying to breathe again.

"Just wait until splash mountain" Grayson said with an evil look.

"What is it" I asked while he was directing me to the other big mountain. What's with Disney land and mountains?

"So it's a mountain and it's a water ride. You go in the mountain and do a 50 meter drop" Grayson said perfectly fine and casual.

"50 METERS" I gasped in disbelief.

"Yep. It'll be fun" he said with a smile.

"You sure" I asked nervously.

One thing no one knows about me is my biggest fear. Of heights. I hate heights.

"I'll be right by your side" he said smiling.

"Okay" i simply said.

I don't like this


"Keep your arms and feet in at all times" the man said.

Same as before the man got us on straight away and before I knew it we were on.

"Why are we going up this ramp thing?" I asked.

"Don't worry nothing dangerous" he said and I sighed in relief.

"We have 3 more of those to go then we have the drop" he said and I gulped.



"We are nearly there" Grayson said smiling.

I can tell he really likes this ride.

"Okay I have something to tell you" I said and he looked nervous.

"What is it?" He asked.

"IM AFRAID OF HEIGHTS" I blurred out.

I couldn't keep it as a secret any longer. Way to hard.

"Really?" He asked and I nodded.

"I am too. Not to bad but I'm trying to act brave"

"Really?" I asked

"Yeah, but don't worry. You can be in my arms when we go down" he said holding me in his arms.

My hands were on his clenched on.

His arms were around me and my head was on his shoulder. I don't know if it's safe to do this but who cares.






Am I in heaven or some strange wet hell that will be haunting me for the rest of my life. Sorry I really need to stop talking about jake Paul's videos and continue about the date.

The ride finished. I'm dead but at least I died in Grayson's arms

"C'mon neeve" Grayson's said snapping me out of my thoughts.

"I have a surprise for you" he smiled and took my hand.

"Where are we going?" I asked.

"Shhh.... just follow" he said still leading me.

Before I could say anything I knew exactly where he was taking me. I didn't want to make him disappointed that I already had a feeling where we are going so I kept quick.

"Close your eyes" Grayson said.

So I obeyed him.

"3,2,1 open" he said and I did.

In front of me was standing Mickey Mouse.


"Hello" I said and Grayson got his phone out and he asked someone to take a photo of us with Mickey and they did.

"Say cheese" Grayson said smiling. He has the best smile I swear I could die if I stare to long.

Grayson thanked the person for taking the photo and he had another surprise for me.

We were standing waiting for the fireworks. He knew how much I loved them so he saved us the best spot to view them from.

All of a sudden they started going. I could hear the way the fireworks popped in the air and it made me feel relaxed and calm.

Grayson looked at me and I looked back at him.

The eye contact was intense. I think.

He leaned in obviously going to kiss me so I did the same. This date was meant to see who I liked more even though I hated done anything with Ethan yet but you never know.

Grayson's lips touched mine and the fire works started getting louder and stronger.

It was a great background noise to resemble how the kiss felt.

It's like fire works were let out and exploded. It was real magical.

It was a good date and definitely a hard one to beat.

Good luck Ethan.

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