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3. The Distance Between Us

The Distance Between Us:

~ I'm not usually a fan of long chapters, but I think it fits your story really well

~ I really like the idea of the flashbacks

~ I also liked that instead of doing the normal titles for each chapters you use the dates

~ I really loved all the details you used

~ Also your blurb really explains the story

~ I also love the Spongebob reference (because who doesn't love Spongebob) 

~ Also the fact that you used the Spongebob reference to explain more about who your characters is very unique (which I adore)

~ I really loved this story, and I can tell there are multiple ways your story can go (which I also love :3)



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