Our Reflection - For Poetry Competition - Movellas

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  • Published: 20 May 2015
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This is written in the perspective of a boy who someone incredibly close to him, sadly passes away, and he can't get away from his sadness and reminding that he is gone.

I don't really do poetry often, but actually enjoying it! Would love feedback from anyone on this or another of my stories. Thank you so much! ;)


1. Our Reflection

Goodbye brother.

You didn't have to go
Our covered face
Let others know 
You where once here
But now your gone

In our reflection
After our death 
I saw you crying
I couldn't bear so
Covered our face
Lived my days
Not seeing you 
Until I met her
Told her about my 'Dead twin'
She uncovered our face
Tucked the hair behind our ears
And I saw you 
In the shop window
I talked with you
The rest of the night
Never covered my face again
To let others know
You are always here
You are never gone

Hello brother.

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