Movella Reviews •{On Break}•

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P.S. If you like Harry Potter please try my other Movella, "After the War"


4. Mirlotta (the pretty girls)

Hello :)

Blurb: Your blurb is very good. Absolutely perfect. It's brilliantly worded and there is absolutely no need to change it whatsoever.

Grammar: Honestly I can't find any grammar mistakes. It actually amazes me how there isn't any, there is usually a few, even in the best of movellas.

Punctuation: Same as the grammar

Character Description: This Movella is really really really good. But a tiny bit more character and thing/place description could improve it.

Cover: Perfect :)

Sorry this is really small. I just think this Movela doesn't really need any improvement :)

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