Don't let me go ( a Harry Styles fanfiction)

Hi my name is Madelyn Paige McCormick but everyone calls me Maddie, and by everyone I mean my mom, dad, brother, and best friend Lanie. I have long straight brown / red hair and hazel eyes. My face is sprinkled wit freckles and I have wore glasses since I was 4 . I am 17 and a junior at St. Luke's academy. I have a sister named McKenzie in 12th grade, I have always been her shadow. She has curly blonde hair and sparkling blue eyes, she Is cheer captain. I play the flute, see ?


13. Realize

Harry's P.O.V

I feel horrible knowing I'm the reason why Madelyn is in coma, I just broke up with Caroline, I told her she was only a replacement for Maddie, I'm pretty sure she won't be voting for One Direction, but it was worth it. 

My mom just walked into the hospital room and clasped her hands over her mouth looking at Maddie's pale body. She walked over to her bed and took her hand. The rest of the boys walked in and stood shocked. Probably thinking that one of their best mates  caused it. My mom pulled out her phone and dialed Maddie's parents. I stepped out of the room and slid down the wall and took out my phone. I was thinking of who to call but realized everyone I have is in that room mad at me other then Breht who I have not talked to all week. I scrolled down my contacts and found McKenzie's number, I pressed the call button and it started ringing. She picked up and I heard loud music in the background. 

" I knew you would call  Harry ! Sooooo, did you win that show thingy yet ? Do you have  all the money in the world yet ?"

" McKenzie, i'm calling to tell you your sister is in coma."

It was silence on the phone, she probably went outside.

" Oh my god, is she ok ? Will she live, Harry ?"

" We don't know yet, "

" Oh my gosh, what hospital I need to tell my sister I'm sorry , I have been so mean to her !"

" Actually it is my fault, I broke up with her and she stopped eating."

" So your the reason my sister is in coma , are you kidding me?Whatever tell me the adress I will buy a plane ticket. "


I hung up and texted her the adress. I walked back into the room and my mom said

" Her parents are on their way, they should be here early tomorrow,"

I nodded and sat in a chair . I stared at Maddie's now even more tiny then before, the doctor said she weighs 82 pounds now, and should be 75 pounds by the time she should wake up which is in a week but she could wake up later. 


Anne's P.O.V

2 weeks later

I woke up next to Maddie's mom in the chair next to her. All the boys except Harry and Maddie's dad along with her little brother had gone home to rest. McKenzie was lying next to Maddie with tear stained cheeks. Yesterday the doctor had told us she has a slim chance of living so McKenzie has apoligized about 50 more times and has not left her sister. Jackson does not know what is going on he just stays on his dads lap. Harry has not talked in a week. I still love him but I am just disapointed. Maddie's parents have been a wreck ecspecially her mom, she crys almost all day but I can't blame her because I cry all the time too and ahe is not even my daughter.Gemma just sits in the corner other then when she brings food back for everyone.

The doctor walked in waking everyone up. 

" Sorry for waking you but I have some news. I don't think Madelyn will last much longer she is too tiny for a 17 year old she is 69 pounds, she has at least 5 days unless there is a huge miracle."

Maddie's mom started bawling her husband set Jackson on his shoulder and held his wife, Gemma was holding back tears and McKenzie was holding her sisters hand. Harry bardged out of the room I followed him yelling his name. I caught up to him and wrapped him in a hug he cried into my shoulder. I led him into the cold air and sat on the bench.

"Mom, i love Maddie but i am the reason she is in coma, i hate myself, Gemma won't talk to me and Madelyn will hate me if she ever does wake up."

" Harry I love you, Gemma does and Maddie definitly does. But you broke her heart so she had a reason to hate you but she cried over you and would not eat, that means she actually loves you, you need to be strong and help Maddie through this , she is fighting for her life and she needs help. You need to help her."

He nodded and walked inside with me following him.



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