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8. Review for: Fiery Girl by Skylar Black

Hi Skylar!! It's Mirlotta :)

This is an amazing movella, packed with some really awesome description and a cool supernatural plotline. You've obviously put a lot of work into this! 

One of the only problems the story has is commas. Your longer sentences will flow a lot better with commas separating them. As well as this, when you say, 'The first prophecy said "Death etc."' you need a comma  between 'said' and the first inverted commas. This problem occurs quite frequently throughout the story, but apart from this and a few minor spelling errors, there is little that I can find wrong with this! 

Well done!!



- Myrah 

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