The Unforgiven Angel

An Angel of Christmas called Faith, has disobeyed God. Those who disobey God are not easily
forgiven. Jesus takes her down to earth, and dumps her there. While on earth she must help
seven random people to make their Christmas happy once more. But she has no idea who these people are that need her help. Even if she does find them, how can she help them all before Christmas day? She only has one week to obey God, otherwise she is thrown out of Heaven forever. She wil be stripped of her immortality, and lose her beautiful wings. She will be made to walk the earth as a human, till the day she dies.


1. Disobedience

Faith was a rather naughty young angel. She was like no other angel her age. She would try

her luck in all situations, and be bad, just to see how much she can get away with it. God

knew just how naughty she was, and so him and Jesus began to hatch a cunning plan to put

her right. After all Angels are meant to be good. It's devils that are suppost to be bad.

God spoke in a bellowing voice. "We have to do something about that angel called Faith".

Jesus sighed and said "I quite agree. Her naughtiness has got to stop". God said

thoughtfully "she needs to be punished. Told off enough in order to put her right". Jesus

scratched his chin and said "but how would we go about punishing her?" God just simply said

"just wait until she next disobeys. I have an idea in mind". God paused for a second and

then turned to Jesus and said "give Faith a serious warning. It is only fair that she has a

chance not to be punished". Jesus nodded and then headed off to find Faith.


Jesus found her drawing on the walls of someones house. Jesus did not tell Faith off,

instead he just stood and watched her from behind. Faith did not notice Jesus was there for

ages. She went about spraying, and writing words all over the wall, whilst laughing

hysterically. Jesus made her jump when he suddenly said "I see you spelt idiot wrong".

Faith shreiked in shock as she said "sorry". Jesus said maturly "no your not. Let me guess

you flunked angel school again". Faith said with surprise "how did you know?" Jesus smugly

replied with "reason number one, school is on-going as we speak, and your not there, and

reason number two, your spelling". Faith said nothing. There was no point argueing with the

son of God. Jesus then said "you've spelt it I-D-I-E-T, rather than the correct spelling

being I-D-I-O-T. Clearly it is you who has been made the idiot". Faith blushed with

embressment as a passing angel laughed at the comment Jesus made.


Faith said crossly "look, why did you come find me? You didn't simply come down here to say

hello did you!" Jesus tutted and said in a patronizing voice "your very rude arn't you".

Faith said nothing as Jesus explained why he had come. "God insisted I warn you of the

consiquences of your next bad move". Faith snorted sarcastically and said "oh I'm so

scared". Jesus said with rage "you should be! He created everything, even you! He could

take your life away from you in a single heart beat! So hear my warning, or forever regret

your action!" Faith said with shock "ok, ok, for god's sake!" Jesus spat as he yelled

"never use the lords name in vane!" Faith did not even appologize as she snidily said "what

ever". She walked away from Jesus as he said mysteriously "don't say I didn't warn you.

Watch your back if you decide to do one more bad move. Remember, God's watching your every

move missy".


Faith was a little disturbed, and sightly worried by the conversation that just went down.

She decided to try and behave for once, just for a day until things call off. She thought

that maybe by tommorow God would have forgotten about the whole punishment thing. She

decided it best to sleep on it, because she was only ever good as gold while sleeping. She

couldn't help being bad though. It was in her nature. She was aloud to get away with being

naughty for so long. God had always given second chances, but he believed Faith really

could change for the better. But giving her so many chances with no punishment had made

matters worse. Faith had taken advantage of God's weakness. But little did she realize how

almighty he really was.


First thing in the morning she went to the angel assembly hall to get her duties for the

day. Some angels were on guard at the gates, others taught classes for a day, some did the

cleaning, and others had nothing to do that day. When it was Faith's turn to go up for

duty, God spoke in a booming voice "as you well know Christmas is near". Faith said nothing

as God continued. "You have the most important job of them all today. Your job is to sit on

top of the christmas tree until midnight. You being on the top of that christmas tree will

give hope to all those people down on earth for a single day".


Faith sighed and moaned about the job she had been given. She ungratefully said "I'd rather

pick up rubbish". God shouted loudly "how dare you defy me! You know what, I have had just enough of your attitude towards everyone! You think your better than everyone else! Your wrong! I should of punished you a long time ago! I have given you so many chances, but now, you will be

punished!" Faith tried to opologize, and began pleading for her life in fear that he may

strike her down for all her sins. God calmed down and said quietly "see you in angel court

first thing tommorow". He then walked off, leaving Faith shuddering with worry. Faith

thought it best to obey God by taking her job of sitting at the very top of the christmas

tree, in hope that God may forgive her and change his mind about the whole punishment



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