The Worst Fanfiction Ever Written

So I decided to write this as a joke, I've read a lot of fanfiction with some of these 'mistakes' like really odd phrasing and/or really bad story lines.
So... sit back, relax and marvel over this fanfiction and hopefully you will have couple of laughs along the way.
Cringe worthy moments take up 99% of this book..


3. Chapter 2

*good so far? Loving it?*


Daisy's P.O.V.

So while I am walking I figured it would be good to tell you about myself.

Well, I am gorgeous, blonde and obviously model thin. 

I have NO idea who One Direction are, but of course. You knew that.

I don't have a job, even though I'm 19 years old and should be working my ass off but that's alright because I'm responsible enough to handle ANYTHING that comes my way and my Mummy and Daddy pay for EVERYTHING. Obviously.


That is all I will tell you for now be because everything you need to know you will find out. Promise.


I arrived at Starbucks.


*Okay, THAT ^^^^ is soooo annoying!!! The chapters being legit 1 paragraph long and also ending on a suspenseful note... I mean, if it's something huge and ending on a suspenseful note is going to keep everyone interested and wondering then YES by all means do that! But if it's like "I dropped my hamburger" GASP WORTHY or what?! That's definitely gonna keep everyone wondering what is going to happen next! Is she gonna clean it up? Is the maid going to? Is it just going to be left there to rot? We just don't know. 

No just no.*

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