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this story is not a fairy tale. major bumps in the road. Ellie has some troubles in life when her dad dies, and her mom is out of control. Louis is the only one who can keep her bound. But can he forever? read on to find out


1. dad?

 Hey guys!! long time no see! It's been a while since I have been on because i have had absolutely no luck with ideas! But, I have been reading for inspiration and i finally got back into the grove to write for you amazing fans!! please don't forget to vote and comment ideas when you are done. My lovely potatoes, ENJOY!!


Ellie's P.O.V.

Finally! School is kaput for me! It is no more! Summer has started and I am ready to finally to spend time with my family.

I start walking home when I see police cars and ambulance's surrounding my house. I run as fast as I can down the rugged sidewalk. I am freaking out at the sight of my mom crying, but I don't see dad anywhere.

" Mom, where's dad?"

she just sobs harder.

" Mom please? Whats going on?"

Just then, I see detectives coming out of the house with a body on a gurney. No. No. NO!! Please don't be dad.

" Ma'am could you come over here please?" the detective said motioning me over to him.

"May I ask what's going on?" I asked quite frantically.

" I see no one has told you."

" Told me what?!" Just then i feel two strong pair of arms around my waist. I turn around to see Louis with teary eyes. Then Louis spoke. I was not prepared for what was coming out of it.

" Ellie, Your dad took his own life. I'm so sorry. I know you were closer to him than your mom was close to him."

My vision was taken by tears and I collapsed in his arms. I just lost my father. The man who was there when my horrid mother wasn't. She never cares about anyone but herself.  Now she was the only one I had left. It was going to be hell. I want my dad back. I want him to tell me that everything is going to be okay. I still want to go to soccer games with him. I want to wake up to the sweet smell of Mickey Mouse pancakes. Now I have to wake up to a bowl of cereal or burnt eggs. I want to hear him say 'I love you' just one more time. Now that's all gone.


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