Typical love story? Boy meets girl. Girl meets boy. They fall in love. And they all live happily ever after. The end. No. This story is filled with drama, secret admirers, jealousy, suspense, fear and betrayal. It all begins with a simple and innocent summer camp...


3. Chapter 3


When Louis left everyone just looked at him until he was out of our sight.

"Well I don't want to stand here with you losers.....So bye suckers!" I said and walked back in the tent.

After like 15 minutes of waiting on Rachel she finally came. She looked pissed. HOW?! I have only seen her pissed like 5 times! SHIT! This must be bad!

"Who the hell was it?" I said. We both knew each other too well that we didn't even have to start off with the usual 'Are you okay?' and 'What's wrong?'

"A boy named Louis Fucking Tomlinson got on my nerves." She said. If this was a cartoon, smoke would be fuming out of her ears.

"I am gonna kill him! but is it just me or have you heard that name before?" I said

"Yeah when you say it, I think I have I don't know where... but anyways, forget that. We have to go to the campfire now." She said I nodded and we walked out of the tent. We walked until we came to the campfire.


Yeah you got it right! It was Steve Jobs!

Just kidding he is dead...

it was the boys......Yep the nickname to them is the boys. I'm so creative! Look at Louis! He looks so... what's the word? Hmm... he looks pissed and...what? He's staring at Rachel...again! Can't this boy take a hint and know when to back away from a girl if she's clearly not interested? 

"What are you staring at?" I snapped at Louis and he looked away and...was that a blush? or the redness from the heat from the fire? Rachel noticed this but just pretended she didn't.

"Here." I said and I sat down. Rachel sat beside me and smiled. She took her bag and opened it. She had marshmallows! Oh my god! I am weak for them okay! 

"I love you!" I screamed and tackled her in a massive hug. I love this gal so much! Everyone is watching me like I am a freaking alien or something.

"What?! Is it wrong to love someone?" I said and everyone looked away. Ha! lol! Did I just say lol in my head? What?! I will soon start to say YOLO if I keep saying lol. What is wrong with me? I wan-

"welcome to the campfire." Miss Twist said. Plot twist.....That wasn't even funny. (A/N Julia, you have no idea how much I laughed at that XD- Neha)

"Hi..." Everyone droned. Imagine how you'd say good morning to the teacher in school on the first Monday back from the summer holidays. Yeah, like that! I don't see why people hate camp? Rachel and I love it! Rachel shouted 'HI' happily but once she realised the tone everyone else said it in, her voice trailed away. I tried to keep in a laugh. She nudged me slightly in the elbow, knowing my reaction. 

"Let's just start to welcome every person here and begin to know each other. Everyone's gonna say what their is name and something about themselves." She said. Oh no! I knew this would come! 

"Claire, why don't you start?" She said. Oh god.

"I am Claire...pretty obvious... and I love my best friend Rachel. She's been my best friend ever since nursery." I said and grinned at Rachel who was smiling back at me, with a slight blush on her face. Rachel and her blushes... haha she blushes so easily!" Some people laughed. I looked up to see who it was. It was some random people and the boys......Wow? Really? I don't even have any comment on that. Talk about immature!


"I am Claire...pretty obvious... and I love my best friend Rachel. She's been my best friend ever since nursery." I smiled at Claire. True, she's tough and intimidating on the outside but inside she's a penguin! I couldn't help but blush. 

"You know, you look cute when you blush" A hot breath said in my ear. I jumped back in surprise, almost falling off the log that we were sitting on. 

I looked around to find Louis right next to me? How the hell did he get here? He was on the other side. 

"Why are you here?" I spat. I am not in the mood to put up with his shit right now. 

Louis looked taken aback for a split second before his cocky smirk reappeared.

"Why am I like forbidden to sit here?" He joked.

"Yes." I replied plainly. Louis raised his eyebrows as he looked back at me. 

He got up to sit somewhere else. He sat next to another really pretty girl. Blonde hair, bright blue eyes. He shot me a wink to which I rolled my eyes. Typical player. 

"Rachel" Mrs. Twist called out my name.

"Y-Yes?" I said, caught off guard.

"Your turn. Tell us all something about you" She said.

"Um... well, I, uh," I hesitated. Gosh, who am I? Why can't I be like Claire? She's much more better at this!

"I like to play the piano, I love dancing and Claire's my best friend as you already know. Always has, always will!" I said.

I looked over at Louis. He was whispering stuff to the girl next to him. Seriously? How do people actually fall for his players ways? It's crazy!

After the awkward welcoming session, everyone was getting ready for dinner. We all went back to our tents to get ready for it.  

Claire and I went back to ours.

"Rachel?" She asked in that tone of hers. I know that tone. This means we're going to talking about a really touchy topic.


"I still don't think you should still be pushing boys away from you every time they try to be friends with you. I know what happened before. It really hurt you but that doesn't mean all they boys are like that!" She said. She has got a point. It all happened 2 years ago.

"I can never look at boys the same again, Claire. What he did, was just... life scarring. No one's ever going to change my mind" I said, trying not to cry.

"Rachel, I'm sure. One day, you'll finally open up. And the boy who makes you do that, will the The One" She said, picking up the rest of our food items. 

"I doubt it" I trailed off. We walked back to the campfire. Everyone else had already started to eat. The boys were sitting as a group right next to us.

"Claire, can we sit somewhere els-"

"Oh hi girls!" Niall said, running over to us. He hugged Claire who hugged him in return. Niall began eyeing the packet of marshmallows in her hand. Within seconds, he snatched it out of her hand and stared to run off. When Claire realised what he had done, she began running after him. 

I couldn't help but smile at the cuteness between the two of them. I got up and walked to the table where all the drinks where. 

"Hey Rachel" A deep, husky voice said behind me. I turned around to find Harry.

"Uh... hi Harry" I smiled back. 

"Listen, I was wondering if you wanted to hang out. Like after dinner. I'm new here. maybe you could show me around" He said, scratching the back of his neck whilst looking down at the floor. 

"Don't you know anyone else who could show you?" I asked. I know I sounded really rude.

"Not really. Only you and Claire. The boys are no help. And Claire well looks like she's busy with Niall" He nodded at them. I looked to the side to find them sitting down on top of the hill together eating marshmellows together. Which really surprised me because you'd have to go through hell and back in order to get Claire to share her food with you. No, seriously. 

"I can't believe Claire is actually sharing her food with him. You'd have to go through hell and back if you want to!" I said to him. 

Harry chuckled, "Yeah, same with Niall!" His smiled faded away.

"So is that a yes?" He asked.

"Sure" I can't believe I'm actually doing this. 

"Let me just go and get my coat from the tent. You can wait outside" I said, walking over to my tent, with him following behind me. I unzipped it and crawled inside. I grabbed my coat when I noticed a small note sticking out of my sleeping bag. It was addressed

I opened the note. My eyes scanned through the words, my eyes widening. No. No. This can't be happening. No one knows but Claire. I haven't told anyone but her.

Dear Rachel, 

3rd March. Remember that date? I'm sure you remember it better than your own birthday. That's right. I know your secret, love. And I'm going to be the one who opens you up. Breaks down your high walls. You'll be receiving a note like this every week.

If only you knew who I am. 

See you later my lovely Rachel.

From your admirer <3 ;)


How do you like my awesome cliffhanger!!!!! And Julia, I'm not going to tell you who it is either! lol :p


-Neha (AKA Tiger99)


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