Long Lost Twin

My name is Lizzie, my Mum recently died from cancer so I was forced to live with my aunt. That also meant moving schools and making new friends. I did have a Dad but I never knew him. Mum did, they split when I was born. He took my twin and Mum took me.


49. Chapter 47: Proposal


"Hey." He mumbles weakly. 

"How are you feeling?" I ask him. 

"Sore, I guess." Louis sighs. 

"I thought we were going to lose you! You were asleep for ages!" I gasp.

“What happened to Kathy?” Louis asks.

“She killed herself.” I tell him. He nods.

“Good.” He sighs.

I’m so happy Louis is okay.



Louis got released from hospital after a week. He can’t do any concerts for the next month so the concerts the boys had planned have to be done without him.

“It sucks that I can’t do any concerts.” Louis complains. We were sat on the sofa. I had my arm wrapped around his chest and my head was resting on the front of his shoulder. We were currently watching the news on TV.

“At least it’s only for a month.” I reply. Louis kisses my hair.

“I suppose so.” He sighs. “I’m just glad that Kathy is definitely dead for good now. I still feel bad about not believing you.”

“You don’t need to feel bad.” I tell him. I sit up and look him in the eye. He leans forward and kisses my lips.

“Ew. Not in here!” Zayn whines as he walks into the living room. Louis pulls away and chuckles.

“We put up with you and Perrie when she’s here.” Louis retorts.

It’s cute that Perrie and Zayn are still together, they recently got engaged. Liam and Paula are still together and so are Niall and Jazzmin. Harry and El are still together, except it’s not official yet. They’re keeping it quiet for a month before announcing it. Harry and El are currently at the cinema watching a film together.

“Lizzie? Do you want to go out to dinner later?” He asks.

“Sure, where?” I reply.

“There’s this really nice restaurant in town, I’m thinking of taking you there.” He explains. I nod.

“Sounds great!” I reply and kiss his cheek.



The restaurant was nice, and expensive. I’m glad I decided to change into my dress that is navy blue with a floral pattern on it. It was Louis’ idea for me to look nice. Louis was wearing black trousers and a light blue shirt. He looked gorgeous.

I put a mouthful of the pasta in my mouth. It tastes delicious.

“Nice?” Louis asks and I nod.

“Definitely, thanks for suggesting we go out.” I thank him.

“It’s no problem. Plus I love taking my girlfriend out to dinner.” Louis replies and gives me a wink. I blush.

Then Louis stands up and walks around the table to where I am sitting. He gets down on one knee and pulls out a small red box.

As he opens the box he says “Lizzie, I want to be with you forever, will you marry me?”

I could feel my cheeks burning. I wasn’t embarrassed, just shocked. People turn around in their seats to see what was going on which only made me blush more.

I nod. “Yes.” I get up and Louis pulls me into a hug. He kisses me on the lips and when he pulls away he slips the ring on my finger.

The ring was beautiful. It was gold and had a small flower in the middle which has diamonds in each petal.

“The ring is beautiful.” I tell him and give him a smile. “I love you.”

“I love you too.” 


A/N -- 

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