Saving Louis

Soon to be 16 year old Amy Hunt was having the time of her life with her mum, dad and soon to have a new baby sister. What happens when one day they have a early celebration for her 16th birthday but can one accident change the future for her and her family? but most important what happens when she becomes one directions stylist? love and friendship will be tested, enemies will be made and the truth will make this story twist and turn for better and for worst.

(Strong language in some scenes)


8. Freedom and more accidents


Amy's P.O.V

After hearing the ear piercing sound of glass smash, everything went black i couldn't see just the darkness which consumed me. I felt free being hear, i can hear my own thoughts. I imagined a meadow, I stood there watching the sunset over the trees of the forest behind. 

I felt someone walking around me, i turned to see someone i was least expecting.

"Mum, Dad!" I shouted as I ran into their arms.

"Hello Darling," My mum said in a sad tone which left me confused.

"Darling you shouldn't be here it's not your time yet," My dad mentioned and I shook my head in denial.

"No i want to stay with you dad, I have no-one left there, no one to love me and joke with me like we used to," I whined with tears.

"Darling you do have people who love you just look behind you," she said and i looked at her then turned around to be in a vision of a hospital room.

"This is what's happening now while we're talking to you while your in a coma, look at the Simon, Paul and the boys their heart broken seeing you like this," Mum explained rubbing my back.

I stared at the scene around me, Zayn's there crying next to me looking like he hasn't slept. Liam is silently crying so the other boys don't here. Harry is crying more than Liam and hugging Niall who is crying in his neck and then there is Louis. Looking at him totally made my heart shattered. He was in Paul's arms saying something while bawling his eye's out.

"I never got the chance to tell her i had feeling's for her, she saved me Paul," Louis said and Paul looked confused at what the lad had said to him.

"What do you mean Louis, how did she save you?" He said. Louis took his bracelets off and showed Paul, cuts on his wrist. I gasped at the same time as Paul who quickly hid the scar from anyone who was looking at them.

"She saved me Paul the minute her and Claire came to the concert i stopped i've been clean for 5 days and i just feel the urge to do it again after what i did," He explained bursting out into tears.

"Mum, Dad let me go back please i got to stop him," I said and they both smiled and lead me to the door saying Earth.

"Im gonna miss you mum,"

"Me to darling and i don't want to see you until it's your time ok,"

"Ok thanks mum," I hugged her then went to my dad.

"Thanks dad and thanks for turning the stereo up im gonna dedicate that song to both of you,"

"Your welcome sweetheart, look after Claire and yourself,"

"I will thank you so much for being there,"

"I always will Amy now go and stop him before he does something that he will regret," I smiled and hugged them and walked through the door.


I woke up screaming, "LOUIS DON'T DO IT!" And my eye's focused to see everyone staring in shock.

"AMY!" Zayn shouted


*While Amy is talking to her parents*

    Zayn's P.O.V

I watched as her heart monitor jumped every couple of minutes. I couldn't help crying, i could have stopped her but i didn't.

I stood up and went over to Liam who was trying to be tough but i knew he just needed to hug someone.

"Hey Liam, come here mate," I said to him and pulled him into a hug. He just sat there and started crying really hard.


We were all upset no-one had slept, only me and the other boys eat except for Louis, he wouldn't touch it. He feels guilt and sadness.

Just as we were getting up to go out the room, Amy's heart monitor went through the roof. Until we heard a scream.

"LOUIS DON'T DO IT!" What did she mean by that, i didn't have time to react.

"AMY!" I shouted and ran to hugging her tight afraid of losing her.

"Zayn, get me water please," She asked and i ran over to the drink fountain and pured some water into a cup and gave it to her.

"Your awake," Liam said, hugging her.

"yeah i am," She said while getting a hug from Niall. Then Harry went to hug her and broke down in tears.

"Don't worry Harry im here now, nice to know you all left your hair the same way," She smirked. This cause a little bit of relief and happiness.

"I need to talk to Louis and Paul alone please if thats ok," She asked and me and the rest of the lads went out the room.


Amy's P.O.V


Once the lads left Paul came and hugged me. 

"Don't let him do it please Paul," I asked and he nodded but also looked confused on what i was on about. I looked round and Louis looked like he was about to break down.

"Come here Louis," I said and he ran into my arms and held onto me for dear lifen while breaking down.

"Don't do it again Louis," I said and he came out the hug and looked at Paul and then to me confused.

"W..What do you mean?" He asked. I pulled up his bracelets to reveal his scars which i traced.

Paul and Louis both looked shocked in how i knew that.

"How did you know Amy?" Paul asked.

"When I was in the coma I saw my mum and dad, they showed me that i have people here that i love and they showed me what was happening around me and i saw and heard the conversation between you and Paul, I know that you think i was the one to save you from cutting and that you are 5 days clean," I explained and let a tear slide down my cheek.

"I also know that you have feeling for me," I said and Louis looked shocked at how much i knew about the conversation.

"I..," Louis didn't finish the sentence before i crashed my lips into his. H was shocked at first but then started kissing back but we were brought back to reality after Paul cleared his throat.

"Sorry Paul," I said blushing and he made his way out the room smiling.

"Amy im sorry i have been i total asshole to you, I have been depressed for months now from the break up with eleanor, I started cutting the day it happened, then i started getting irritated by everyone else, Im sorry about your Parents and how i made you get involved in the car accident, I just feel so guilty," He said before he started crying again.

I put my finger under his chin and made him look at me.

"Now look here Louis ok, it's not your fault Eleanor broke up with you, she was not the one for you, Second i did this to myself, i should have pulled over instead of driving off with mixed emotions, I don't care how long you stay angry but you need to apologise to the other lads and Simon and then i will help you, im gonna save you Louis," I said and he smiled at me before kissing me more passionately.

"Thank you Amy," He said before getting up.

"Now get Simon, Claire and the other boys in here so we can talk peasant" I commanded.

"How dare you sass me, im the sassy one here love!" He demanded, while putting his hands on his hips.

"Whatever helps you sleep at night Louis," I said and he stormed out the door. Five minutes later the boys and Simon came in with Louis who was holding Claire.

"Sit boys and you Simon, sorry it's nice to see you but we need to talk," I said and Louis passed me Claire while everyone else took a seat.

"Ok so you all now know im awake, but that isn't the full story here, I was in a coma and I saw my mum and Dad there in a meadow," I explained and they all had sorrow looks on their faces. Jeez i need to get out of this hospital, it's so depressing here.

"I told them that i didn't want to come back but they showed me something which broke my heart, they showed me the last recent scene before i woke up. Liam you were crying in Zayn's arms while Harry and Niall were crying in each other's arms.what broke my heart the most is when it came to the conversation which i heard and saw with Paul and Louis," All the boys looked confused, including Simon.

"I heard Louis talking about me, he said that i saved him from cutting ever since we got handcuffed together, he admitted that he had feeling for me, that's why i woke up screaming for Louis not too do it because my dad said i had to stop him because other wise you would be mourning over two people, " I said and Harry started crying.

"I know it's hard to believe but it's true and when you all went out the room Louis told me and said that he is sorry for being such an Asshole to me and you guys, he also said that he has been depressed with everything because of the break up with Eleanor, now i know that you guys might think it's Louis fault for me being in here buts it's not ok it's mine i drove the car while being sad and angry ok so don't blame him, Also im just gonna say to all of you that the old Louis is coming back, Im gonna save Louis for you sakes and the band's sake and mine," I said and by now everyone came running and engulfed me in a hug.

"Thank you so much Amy and we will always love you your like a sister to us both you and claire," Zayn said and then every went and hugged Louis.


"NO MORE CRYING JEEZ GET ME OUT OF HERE IT'S SO DEPRESSING PAUL!" I shouted and Paul bursted out laughing but i glared at him which caused everyone else to laugh.

"I suggest if you want your hair kept brunette Paul, you go and find a doctor and tell me that i can leave soon," I growled and he jumped behind Simon.

"ADULT ABUSE HELP ME SIMON, YOU GIRL IS AN EVIL PIECE OF WORK," He shouted and ran out the room with Simon who was shaking his head laughing.


"So guys I guess this is a new start for all of us yeah?" I asked and they all nodded.

"Of course," Liam said smiling at me.

"Can i ask you guys one favor though," I said.

"Yeah," They all said in unison.

"At your next concert could you dedicate the song Truly Madly Deeply to my mum and dad, im sure it will make them happy?" I asked and they engulfed me in another hug.

"Yes of course it's the least we could do for you," Louis said smiling.

Just as they released me, Simon and a fearful looking Paul came in which caused me to burst out laughing. 

"The doctor said that you can leave whenever you wish," Simon said.

"YES MOTHA F_ I MEAN YES PEOPLE LET'S GO!" i shouted and they all glared at me like i was crazy.


Simon signed the release paper's and we all made our way to the bus but i noticed Louis was walking a bit behind the group so i slowed up and walked with him while giving the baby to the other lads.

"Whats wrong Louis?"

"Nothing it's just how can you forgive me so easily?"

"I forgive and forget Louis, everyone deserves another shot of happiness and that includes you," I said while entwining our hands together.

"Thanks you so much Amy for everything," He said squeezing me hand.

"Your welcome,"

"Like i said Louis im gonna save you and this is just the beginning," I said while squeezing his hand back.

"Beginning of what?" he said staring at the boys.

"A new start," 


Ok guys so when i said you would here what they all went to say to her during her coma, i decided to make it into a dream/ flashback for Amy in the next chapter so don't worry!

Chapter 9 - so chapter 9  is called Happiness and a new start which i am looking forward to writing, as you can tell everything is happy at the end of the scene but found out what happens when new relationships form on the tour bus! and what happens when Paul need advise?


Chapter 10 - Flashbacks and Nightmares from hospital (Louis P.O.V is important in this scene especially when he has to face Simon)




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