Dumb Fanfic Moments

Hey Movella! I'm just writing a "manual" on how to not write a fan fiction! I'm REALLY sorry if I'm offending you in any way, I can take any chapters down for you. Not harm meant, just laughs! Enjoy!


1. Orbs

#1 Orbs:
Oh. My. Gosh. When people say "orbs" it just makes me want to punch a wall and hit my head with the wood I broke. Orbs? Really? I'm not gonna lie, Dark uses it a lot, and that's one amazing fanfic (if you haven't read it, I recommend it!). But it honestly doesn't make any sense and its kinda creepy. Aren't orbs what psychics look into or magicians? Spinning around with back stories in them? I don't know but you know what I mean, right?
Here's an example...
"I stared into deep emerald orbs as he stared into my light blue ones." Kill me now. 

A/N- Thanks for reading! Again I'm not trying to offend anyone just stating my opinion and maybe yours too! ~ Abby❤

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