"I've got it! I've got it! I finally got it!!" I took the time to give myself a little nice pat on the back. Suddenly there was a loud scream coming from the house. It was him. "I'm coming after you! You little brat!" he screamed. I ran as fast as i could. I sprinted outside and across the field while panically searching for a safe place to hide. Finally i spotted a hedge that separated two houses nearby. Hopefully he wouldn't find me. I found a way to snuggle myself in between the large bush and stuffed the objects I stole into my large jacket pocket....

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10. ~Deposits are harder than I thought~

Afterschool I went straight to the bank to deposit my paycheck and then withdraw get the money I needed for Zayn. I entered the bank and waited in line. It was really crowded today. I don't know why. A couple of customers came in behind me and one of them looked familiar. Hey, it's Edith. She's Zayn's aunt, well step-aunt. Edith saw me and came over. She worked here as a side job. I love Edith like another mom.

"Pretty crowed right?" She said

"Yea. I don't know why. There's no holiday or big event coming up right?"

"No I don't think so, except for Halloween, but it's usually never this crowded."


Three gunshots were heard in the crowd and people started screaming. All three of the front desk employees were shot in the arm, shoulder, and stomach. In between groups of people, I saw men and women dressed in black with ski masks on and black gloves. I knew this couldn't be good. Out of no where a man screamed "Everybody get down and put your hands up."

Everyone did what he said, including me. A brawny guy who I guess was the head of the gang came up to Edith and grabbed her by the arm. She stood up and the man held a gun to her head. She was terrified, shaking, and all. When I opened my mouth to say something, he threatened to shoot her head off. I felt helpless. She could die and there's nothing I can do about it. It's like Zayn's tragedy all over again. They're monsters, MONSTERS!! I guess they knew she was an employee here because she was wearing her tag. They took her to the back to unlock the safes, so they can retrieve their money. When the man turned around I noticed the letters W.P. on his back. Wait, wasn't that on the ski mask? On another one of the criminal's back, I saw wolf pack written on his shoulder. That makes sense. W.P. stands for wolf pack. Who ever this gang is, they kidnapped Zayn and they won't get away with it. When they were finished with their business, they ran out of the bank with Edith. What? Where are they taking her. Is she going where Zayn is? I can hear police sirens in the distance. I bet my parents were on this case. The police came to the doors carefully with guns in hand and made their way through. When they cleared the area. My father called on his radio that three people were down. Medical services came into the bank and tried to treat their wounds as best as they could. The bleeding couldn't stop so they rushed them to the hospital. Innocent people almost killed. How could they be so cruel. And now they took Edith too. Why don't they just take my heart. I broke down in tears and sat on the floor. When my parents were done with their job, they came over to me. First they comforted me, then they asked me some questions on the crime since I was a witness, just like what they did for Zayn's investigation. "We need very honest answers sweetie." My mom said. " Tell us exactly what happened."

"Edith...was... kidnapped..." I tried saying in between my sobs. "They held.. a gun to her head... and forced her to unlock.. the safes. Then they ...drove away along with her." I was questioning if I should even tell my parents about seeing W.P. on the burglars jacket. I already told them about the ski mask. I'd be giving way to much away if I tell them about this. I have to keep it to myself and find Zayn. So instead I asked them some questions.

"Mom and dad, can I ask you a question, well two questions?"

"Sure." My mom answered.

"Umm.. How much do you know about the wolf pack gang?"

"Who told you about them?" my dad said looking shocked and angry at the same time. I

"We were learning about them in class today." I had to lie because if I didn't Zayn would be at stake.

"Okay well, to tell you the truth we don't know much. They are very secretive and organized. They usually do crimes in crowded areas where it's difficult to see them. Whenever we try to track them down we either, it leads us to small neighborhoods or in  the middle of no where."

"Did you ever investigate the houses?"

"Every single one and they are just ordinary families with jobs."

"The households had children in it?"

"Yea, but why all the questions? It's not like your investigating anything." or so my mom thinks. "Plus didn't you say you were only going to ask two questions?"

"Yes, but those kind of corresponded with each other. This is my last question. Do you have 20 bucks I can borrow?"

"What happened to your money?"

"That's what I came here for, to withdraw money and make a deposit, but as you can see.... there's a bit of an issue going on."

"Alright. Here." She handed me the money. I knew it wasn't much, but I didn't want to seem too suspicious by asking for a lot of money.

"We might be a little late to come home." My dad said. "We are going to talk to Mr. Wisk, Edith's husband Shaun, about her kidnapping."

"Okay. See you at home."



Hey you guys! I bet you all are on your toes waiting to see who kidnapped Zayn and for Jordyn to finally get to reunite with him. I will keep working on this story, but hopefully I'd get to finish it before school starts. Anyway before the end of the story, I want you to guess who you think the criminal is that kidnapped Zayn. The winner can be a character in my next movella, Fate Guides. I'm really excited to start it and I needed some characters. The first ten of you who guessed correctly, will get told more towards the end of the book. Just submit your answers in my mumbles. Then I'll set another contest to determine who the real winner is out of the ten of you. Afterwards, you'll give me just a couple of details about yourself, so I can add you into my new movella. It would be coming out as soon as I finish up this story. Good luck guys. Also thank you for your comments! They mean a lot :)

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