Entwining dreams

Hey, I began writing on my ipad, so then i went back and edited
I haven't tried anything like this before so, enjoy!
A sudden surge of adrenalin pumped through my viens, I felt my heart burning, as I fell deeper and deeper. All of a sudden a wash of icy cold water crashed over me.
My eyes burst open to see orbs, a mixture of blue and green just like the sea.
those mesmerising eyes full of concern and worry.
"Louis, why the hell did you just pour freezing water over me? "


6. Excuse me?!?!??


Rachel's POV

After having dinner at the fat panda, Louis insisted on walking me back to my hotel.

"Thank you" Louis blushed, he looked incredibly irrestable.

"For what?" I giggled "You paid, Louis" 

"For... Giving me good, enjoyable company without fangirling." he smiled taking my hands 

He bent his head closer to mine 

He was going to kiss me 

He would of kissed me.


"LOUIS HOW THE HELL ARE YOU?!?!?" a caniadian accent boomed.

"Justin lower your voice" Louis calmly placed a arm around my waist.

"nice butt, where'd you find a chick like that Louis?" Justin slurred 

"just go home Justin, I'd appreciate it if you didn't refer to my girlfriend as 'that' " Louis 

Tightened his grip around my wrist. 

WTF (what the fudge ;)


Im the girlfriend of louis Tomlinson 

Hell yeah!


If he tightens his grip any more I'll lose the blood supply to my hand.  

"Babe, your hurting me." I whispered into his ear

"Sorry Hun, Justin is just a prick when he's drunk"Louis murmured into my hair


This was too good to be true 



"Now Rachel, you need to help us, did Mr Jenkins ever hurt you" mummy whispered into my hair I don't know what hurt means any more , sure he hit me, but daddy did that if I was bold . He tried to lure me into his house but i knew better.

(A/N I'm trying to not make this sad, just twisty. Sorry I haven't updated in a while xox)

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