Thunder Strikes

A year later, Edward and Melody are trying to keep their quite new relationship last. Unfortunately a few somebody's are getting in their way, tensing them up. In times of stress, fear, Joy and promises, the young couple needs to raise two toddlers and learn to be honest to themselves and each other.
And while Edward is distant for reasons Melody is not aware of a new attacker who is waiting for the right time to bite.

Will their bond be strong enough to survive? Or will the someone be able to break it?

Thunder Strikes is a sequel to Starless Sky and Moon Girl.

Get bitten and tag along!



This story is RATED 18+ / NC-17 which means the following:

- sex
- violence
- angst
- cursing


44. Thunder 43

Okay so, i['ve had this period of wanting to change the names. so in the next few chapters there will be a few different names. i could have edited it, but because of less time and that i'm actually activating everything during my economics class....yeah you get the picture ;)


Faith became Fairoza. will still be shortened as Fay
Alana became Avalyn. will be shortened as Ava
I changed Blaze into Rhett. why i did that...i don't know. later on he'll become Blaze again....


sorry for the weirdness, but yeah...

Edward Cullen

The sensation is phenomenal. Everything about her surrounds me, her body, her smell, her love and soul. She’s mine. she’ll always be. I can finally see that now, somewhere in the middle of the monster. I’m losing control. And I want to stop it, but I don’t. She keeps crying out in ecstasy, moaning in satisfaction of friction of a feeling. I can’t stop. It’s not fair towards her because I practically promised her this. And besides that, the overwhelming lust and desire I’m feeling makes me delirious with want. But at some point that kind of want changes into something I knew was inevitable.
my lips are at her neck, her soft, pale delicious neck. And I can’t help myself anymore.

I bare my teeth and bite through the soft flesh, immediately feeling her warm red liquid touch my tongue. Yes. This…this is heaven.
The overwhelming arousing feelings make my body explode, filling up her body. I vaguely hear her struggle, screaming my name and begging me to stop.
You don’t want to and you know that! My mind growls.
I squeeze my eyes shut, feeling my girlfriend pushing at my shoulders the best she can. No! stop it! you’ll kill her!
in a flash I’m away from her, stumbling backwards against my bed, crushing the side because of the impact my heavy physique makes.
My eyes are wide and full of fear as I see Melody collapse to the ground. And to my horror, there is blood everywhere.

‘NO!’ I scream in agony. What have I done!? my eyes scan her frail, tiny body as it lays there in a huddle against the wall, blood streaks marking it at the place her back had been leaning against earlier. Out of her neck, the blood is gushing out and streaming downwards over the porcelain skin. Her eyes are closed, her lips slightly parted.
but I can’t see any movement that shows me her breathing. Not even. Not erratic, no gasps. Nothing.
Within a nanosecond I’ve put on jeans and is my hand touching the place where her heart should be beating.
it’s not beating.

‘Melody!’ my hands are flying everywhere, trying to stop the blood from seeping out of the wounds. It’s now that I see she has also several deep cuts on her back. I fly to the bathroom, bringing back a towel and place her on there, laying her flat on her back. The sweet aroma of the fresh amount of blood is burning achingly in my nose, throat and even my lungs. I grit my teeth against the horrendous urge to feed. I can’t feed on her! How could I!
and then I realize that her back should not be my first concern. Her heart! The venom!
before I consider something else, my mouth is back at the gaping wound in her delicate neck, sucking again but for another reason. I need to get the venom out quickly and I pray it’ll make her heart beat again. she’s not dead. She can’t be.

I do everything in my might to ignore how it tastes, concentrating on the sharp sting of the venom. It hurts me, the sting, but I can have it. I’ll carry every sort of pain she had to go through for me. faintly, her heartbeat starts again. but it’s too slow for anyone to survive on.
I keep sucking, but I also keep feeling the sting of venom in her blood. I need to clean her blood, but if I keep going she won’t have much left to clean.
It’s already too far in her system. Finding this, I stop sucking, clean my mouth and find a shirt for her to wear. Having done that I pick her up and run as fast as I can muster towards the swan residence. And I pray to God, that Adam will know how to save her. Raven and Rhett need her. Everyone does.
My ears are completely focused on her heartbeat and slow, shallow breaths. I’m almost there and for once I’m actually grateful for my ability for speed and strength. If I’d been human she surely wouldn’t have survived it. but if I was human, this never would have happened at all.
I need to stop fighting with myself right now. I can do that later, after I know that Melody is alright and wholly alive. Not just barely breathing.
I can already see the house, lights brightening dark spots surrounding it. it’s pitch dark outside and I know that it’s quite late. But I’m sure Adam or another vampire must be awake.

At the door , I balance Melody who’s lying like a soft puppet in my arms on one arm, and I start knocking.
the door opens a bare ten seconds later.
‘Why do I smell – ‘
It’s indeed Adam and now his eyes are fixated on my beloved’s limp body, covered in a shirt drenched in blood.
‘blood.’ He finishes. Adam ushers me inside and I follow. In the kitchen he throws everything of the table so I can place the wounded girl in my arms on it.

‘Scarlett!’ Adam yells while he’s flying through the kitchen like a hurricane. It’s now that I go into hysterics. I can’t say a word. I’m not able to move an inch. All I can is looking at Melody and see what a disgusting monster I am for getting her in this state. And I feel like I’ve raped her. Haven’t I heard her ask me to stop or didn’t she even ask for that? I don’t know.
‘Adam what’s wro – ‘ Scarlett’s icy screech pierces through my eardrums. But I don’t react. I can’t let my eyes go somewhere else.
‘oh my god! What happened!?’ the oldest sister rants with a trembling voice. Adam doesn’t answer and nor do I.
‘Scar, I need you to tell Layla and Skye that they have to keep the kids upstairs. They can’t get down here. And then you have to run a bath and bring me my suitcase,’ Adam demands forcefully as he starts tearing the drenched shirt.

‘Adam no…’ my voice croaks when I realize she bare underneath. Golden eyes find ym glance and he looks at me for a second. Scarlett is already on her way upstairs and Adam calls after her, ’Bring a sheet too please, darling.’
Then he’s focused on me again, ’Edward….I know you don’t like this, but in order to save her I’ll have to her wounds. I’ve seen it before and I don’t want another row of scars covering her. She already has so many.’
Adam is looking at me with a careful gaze and stance. I ball my fists and nod. Adam goes further with tearing the shirt and revealing he naked body to the cold air and sets of eyes.

Scarlett storms back in the kitchen having Layla with her. The blonde woman comes up to me with concern written over her face and she touches my shoulder. I wince without wanting to do it. the hand leaves me.
Scarlett and Adam are quick with draping a sheet over Melody’s body and Layla jumps in with making bowls of hot water to clean the cuts with. They’re discussing what they’re doing and what needs to be done.

And then I remember that the cuts are still not the biggest concern. And just when I want to tell them that the venom needs to get out, Layla shoves Melody hair aside, revealing the enormous bite mark in her neck.
And three pairs of eyes shoot to me with astonishment obvious in their glares.
‘What happened Edward!’ Adam demands angrily as he starts running through the room like a hurricane again, searching for something, ’Layla get the IV-system and oxygen machine! NOW!’

‘I…I…’ I stammered opening and closing my mouth, ’I bit her.’

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