From life to darkness

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1. From life to darkness

"Where am I?" I exclaimed; as I got trapped. Not trapped as in restrained, trapped as in there's no getting out. I shut my eyes and blocked off my feelings and anger as I remembered how I got here. It was that teensy door. That was the devil that brought me here. I remerged to reality. "Brilliant!" I thought sarcastically to myself. “Why was I so stu........?" Then I paused. A man was watching, he attacked! I left the previous environment but entered a horrific world, a nightmare! A nightmare where I can never die.

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