When The Perfect Guy Comes.

This story is about how a girl named Cheyenne Allen goes to a One Direction concert for the first time she also has a VIP ticket to meet them. 3 guys out of 5 like her and she turned 2 down really. Which guy is she going to be with out of the 3? Find out eveything will the one she loves leave her or stay? Please tell me what you think of my fanfic and favorite and like it please this is my first fanfic on here and ever been on a website so again please like, comment, favorite and tell me how it is.


8. The Surprise

The Surprise:

What is my surprise babe? I said.

I can't tell now keep your eyes closed. He said sweetly.

ok, ok. I said. Like 5 mins. later.

ok now you can open your eyes. He said.

I opened my eyes and saw i was in a park with some light around then there was a blanket on the ground and on on the side if we get cold when we look at stars it was beautiful. 

Oh my god Zayn this is beautiful. Thank you so much. I said and kissed him.

Your welcome. He said while still kissing me.

I am thinking tonight right now right here is the perfect moment to sleep with him i want him so bad and i cant handle it anymore.

Zayn brought me to the blanket and carefully laid me down still kissing me and he was over me. This is the moment it needs to happen. Then i felt his hand slide down my waist onto the end of my tight dress. Was he reading my mind? Or did i say it out loud? I don't know.

Zayn i want you to have my virginity right now. I said

Are you sure? He asked.

Yes i can't hold not having you to sleep with me. I said

Ok just tell me when to stop or when it starts to hurt. He said.

Alright. I said.

The moment of my life is coming in a sec or minute i don't know exactly. he starts to kiss me but i changed it to make out then i took his shirt off and his pants and he unzipped my dress from the side and took it off of me.

You do have a nice body. He whispered

Me look at you. I said smiling.

i took the blanket next to us and threw it over Zayn because now  we are completely nude in public he asked if i wanted to start or him i said him because i am new at this. So he was still over me then something painful slid in me but i felt better after a while then i knew something popped and after that pain it felt amazing then i got on top of him and there was a lot of moans that came out of me but i guess its normal.

After a while that felt like 20-30 mins of magic we were under the blanket naked still watching stars but my head was laying on Zayns stomach but i kept going up to his chest i didnt want him to get cold so i just laid my head on his chest and i could hear the sound of his heartbeat i loved that sound.

Hey Zayn. I said.

Yes babe. He said.

Can we head back home it is kinda getting cold? I asked.

Yeah of course if you are getting cold. He said

So we got dressed then headed to the condo. We got there and we went straight to bed without even changing.


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