Lets Keep It A Secret - A 1D Louis Fanfic [ON HOLD]

[ON HOLD for a while] Louis has a girlfriend named Rachel, but no one knows about them. Not the boys nor the media, Louis and Rachel wanted to keep the relationship to themselves. Who knew that was easier said then done? They try their best to keep it a secret, but almost get busted a couple of times.


10. Humiliation and Hiding Rachel

Lets Keep It A Secret- 1D Louis Fanfic


Chapter- 10: Humiliation and Hiding Rachel


Louis POV




Rachel and I were walking hand in hand on the beach, our hands entwined fitting perfectly together. As we walk, our hands would swing along, and the water occasional touching our feet. The sun was low in the sky, only half of it was showing. The sky was painted with pinks, oranges, and yellows, it looked absolutely beautiful. I looked over at the beautiful angel walking along side me. She was absolutely beautiful, and I don’t think I've told her enough times.


"You look absolutely beautiful, you know that?." She looked up at me, a blush creeping onto her cheeks. She smiled and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear.


"Thanks Lou. And you look absolutely handsome." She giggled. I smiled at her, wondering how I ever deserved this beautiful girl. She could have any guy she wanted, and she chooses me? Why is that? What's so special about me? I was so wrapped up in my thoughts that I didn’t even realize I stopped walking, and now I was just staring at her.


"Something wrong Lou?" she asked, concern showing on her beautiful features. I shook my head, and snapped out of my thoughts.


"No, everything's fine, just wondering how I deserve such a beautiful girl like you." I told her. She smiled and looked down at the ground.


"Thanks… but I'm  really nothing special. I'm  actually wondering how I deserve someone like you. I mean, you're THE Louis Tomlinson, you have girls chasing you around, worshiping at your feet. And out of all the girls in the world, supermodels, singers, actresses. You choose me, a normal London girl who works at Nandos. You can have ANYONE you want Lou. But why me?

You know sometimes I think that I'm  holding you back, that you can have anyone you want but I'm  getting in the way. Lou, you deserve way better than me, I'm  nothing special, I don’t live in a mansion with fancy outfits and paparazzi following me wherever I go. I don’t sing, or act. And yet you choose me. Why?" she asked, a tear slipped out of her eye, and it slowly rolled down her face. Is that what she really thinks? She thinks shes holding me back? But that’s not true, I don’t want to be with anyone else but her.


"Rachel, that’s not true. I don’t want to be with super models, or singers or actresses. I just want to be with you. Your not holding me back from anything, because I'm  not trying to reach for anything else. All I want is you, YOU'RE  the one that makes me happy. And there's nothing wrong with being normal, its actually one of the many things I love about you. When my super star life is just too much for me to handle, your always there to keep me grounded. I love you Rachel, and don’t you ever think, for one second, that your no good for me. Because trust me, you are, and I don’t know what I'd do if I lost you. So please don’t think like this anymore, because none of its true. You’re the only one I'll ever want, and I'll NEVER let you go." I told her as I wiped her tear with my thumb. She smiled at me, and crashed her lips to mine. I was taken a back at first, but instantly responded. Her lips were so soft against mine, like a soft feather. She pulled away and smiled at me.


"I Love you, and don’t you ever doubt that." I told her.


"I Love you too boobear." She said with a smile.




I woke up and looked up at the ceiling. Wow, that dream felt so real. I hope that Rachel wasn't thinking like that in reality, because its not true at all. I sighed at the cute kissing scene in the dream, I wish that part was real, because it felt so good. I closed my eyes again and rolled over to my side, trying to get some more sleep. But then I heard a chuckle. I opened my eyes, and saw Harry was seated on a chair beside my bed with an amused look on his face, grinning. He was leaning forward, his elbow resting on his knee, and chin resting on his hand which was holding his head up. I shot up, startled to see him here, in my room, while I was sleeping.


"Gosh! Haz! What in the world are you doing in here?" I exclaimed surprised.


"Well considering your little sneaking out scheme last night, the boys wanted me to come in here and watch you to make sure you didn’t sneak out again." He said like it was not big deal at all that he was watching me sleep. I groaned. I wouldn't have snuck out again after they caught me, I wasn’t that stup*d.


"Ugh! Well how long have you been spying on me like a creeper?" I asked.


"I wasn’t spying like a creeper, I was simply keeping an eye on you for understandable reasons. And I've been here since 5:30 and its now…" he checks the clock on my bedside table. "10:45"


"What?! You've seriously been here since that early? Didn’t you sleep? I got back at like 2!" I exclaimed.


"No, its ok, I wasn’t really tired anyway, and I'm  sleeping this afternoon anyway. Oh and who's such a beautiful girl that you don’t think you deserve? The girl you apparently LOVE and you don’t want her to doubt that?" he asked with a smirk as he wiggled his eyebrows. My eyes grew wide and I swear I was blushing a deep red. I could feel the blood rushing to my cheeks, warming it up. I didn’t know how to respond. I cant believe I was talking in my sleep! Ugh! Way to go Lou! I mentally face palmed myself. Well, I guess it could be worse, at least I didn’t say her name.


"Hmmm… Rachel was it?" Harry asked with an amused look on his face. Oh, my, god, I said her name! My cheeks heated up some more, my cheeks were probably as red as the Chinese flag! I immediately covered my cheeks with my hands, wanting to cover the blush. But I probably just made it more obvious because Harry laughed.


"Aww! Did I just make little boobear blush? What type of dream was it? Hm?" Harry asked wiggling his eyebrows. Wow I actually want to punch the kid.


"Uh, excuse me, I am older than you is one thing. And second, it wasn’t a dirty dream like you usually have, and third, I didn’t blush, I was just rubbing my face." I explained, the first 2 were real, the last one, not so much.


"Uh huh, sure you were." Harry laughed. He got up and was about to exit the room when he turned back around. "Oh and by the way, I know there was a kissing scene because you were making kissing noises in your sleep while making out with your pillow." He laughed before exiting. I groaned and buried my head in a pillow as I felt the blood rush up to my cheeks again, making me blush a deep red. Ugh! Why do I have to do that! I'm  so stupid! But then again, I cant really control anything while I'm asleep. Hmm, no wonder her lips were so soft in my dream, I was kissing a pillow. I let out a chuckle. I was kissing a pillow, that’s a funny thing to say. I sighed and got off the bed and headed for the shower. When I was done, I got dressed and met the other boys in the kitchen. They were all seated on the couch, watching something on a laptop. I guess it was funny, because they were all laughing.


"Hey, what are you guys watching that’s so funny?" I asked coming up behind them. They all jumped a bit at the sound of my voice and quickly shut the laptop. Hmm, something's up.


"Huh? Oh hey Lou! No, that was nothing, we were just watching a-a…." Niall looked at the other boys for help, he was obviously lying though, because his cheeks were going red and he couldn’t even look at me.


"A funny commercial about like this dog… and well… yeah." Harry 'so subtly' lied. Yeah, I was definitely not going to buy that. I raised my eyebrow at them and crossed my arms, showing them I was unconvinced.


"Ugh! You guys are the worst liars ever!" Zayn exclaimed. But I wasn’t arguing, they were.


"Ok… well, we may or may not posted a video of you sleeping and making out with your pillow on the internet…" Liam said in a big rush, ever so quietly. But I heard what he said. These boys are going to have their funerals tomorrow.


"You, did, what?!" I exclaimed angry. Liam grew scared, and he immediately pointed to Niall.


"Niall told me too!" he squeaked. Haha! Glad I can make them as scared as they made me after I snuck out last night. Niall's eyes grew wide.


"What! No! Zayn dared it!" Niall immediately pointed to Zayn. Zayn's eyes grew wide, and he put his hands up in surrender. He pointed to Harry.


"But Harry's the one who video taped you!" he defended himself in a high pitched voice. I would have laughed, but I'm  fuming right now. I gave Harry my most intimidating and scary death glare ever. He looked like a deer caught in the headlights, and I could’ve sworn he was trembling. He started to back away, like he knew I was going to come and kill him, and believe me, I was. I took slow steps towards him, and he mimicked each step I took, going back. Then I lunged at him, and he dashed off, faster than lighting. I chased him around the house, knocking over furniture everywhere. The boys were chasing me, trying to stop me from murdering Harry.


"HAROLD EDWARD STYLES YOU ARE SO DEAD TO ME!!" I yelled angrily as I chased after him. He was so close to me, and I reached my arms out to grab him, but then strong hands pulled me back, Harry took this as an opportunity to escape, he ran off to his room, and locked the door behind him. I turned around to see who pulled me back, and turns out it was Zayn, Liam AND Niall. Liam had his arms around my waist, Zayn's arms around Liam's waist, and Niall's arms around Zayn's waist. They were pulling me so hard, that when I removed Liam's arms from around my waist, they fell to the ground. I let out a chuckle, and they glared at me. They stood up and dusted themselves off.


"Ok, you cant murder Harry for a couple of reasons. 1, he's your best mate and you don’t murder your best mates. 2, we need him for 'One Direction'. 3, its against the law if you murder him. And 4, uncle Si will kill us." Liam explained like a total smart a$$. I groaned and glared at him. Like I didn’t know that, I wasn’t actually going to murder him, I was just going to get revenge. My stomach grumbled, and I knew I needed breakfast. I walked off to the kitchen and got myself a bowl of cereal and milk. While I was eating, I heard a shower turn on in the flat. I thought nothing of it until a thought struck me, if its Harry showering, this will be my time to strike. I walked to Harry's room and slowly opened his bedroom door. He wasn’t anywhere in the room, but the bathroom door was closed, and I could hear the shower was on in there. BINGO! I quietly snuck into the washroom, and searched for his hair dryer, the brush he usually uses and his white towel. I found them and snuck them out. I went into Zayn's room and searched for the baby powder he usually keeps. (don’t ask.) I dumped baby powder into the blow dryer, and put glue onto the brush. Then I put white paint onto the white towel. I snuck back into Harry's washroom, good thing he always takes forever in the shower, and placed the brush, towel and blow dryer back to where they belong. I dashed out of the washroom before he could finish showering, and sat on the couch and flipped the telly on, looking natural. I also decided to film this, since he filmed me sleeping. I got my Iphone out and clicked the camera app. And when I heard the shower turn off, I clicked record, knowing the fun was about to start. I heard the shower door open, then shut, signalling he got out of the shower and is probably in the towel covered with white paint. An evil smile crept onto my face, hehe, its payback time. I heard the blow dryer turn on, followed by a not-so-manly-scream. I chuckled, and waited for him to emerge from his room so I could see the outcome of my brilliant payback prank. He came out of his room, and I made sure to zoom in my camera on him. I burst out laughing at the sight of him. His face and hair were all covered in white baby powder, and his body from the chest down was covered in white paint, showing that he wore his towel the girl way where it covered your chest. And who could miss the big hair brush stuck on his head? I tried to keep the camera steady as I burst into a fit of laughter. He glared at me, and crossed his arms.


"Ha. Ha. Ha. Very funny Lou. You got me back, are you happy?" he asked, his tone dripping with sarcasm. I just nodded, seeing as I couldn’t talk because I was laughing so hard. The boys came out of their rooms to see the commotion, and when they saw Harry, they burst into laughter too. We were all literally rolling on the floor laughing. Especially Niall. Harry just rolled his eyes and shook his head, causing some powder to shake out of his hair. But he himself chuckled too, showing that my prank was obviously a huge success. After my prank and our laughing fit, the boys went back to their rooms to do, god knows what, Harry went back into the shower to wash off the remains of my prank, and I went on my laptop to post Harry's video on the internet (on You Tube and Twitter and every other social site that allowed video postings.) his video got a ton of hits, as well as my 'sleeping make out' video. I searched through the comments on my video, but one site user stood out to me the most… it was Rachel. And as if on cue, my phone dinged, signalling I got a text, and it was from Rachel.


Glad to know you think about me, even in your sleep. Maybe you could redo that kissing scene, but this time, not with the pillow. ;)



Was that a challenge or an invitation? 



We'll see. ;P



Well someone's in a seductive mood. Whatcha doing babe?



Haha! I was just searching through You Tube, when I came across that interesting looking video. And I was right, it was interesting. Anyways, miss you boobear!



Miss you too Racheyboo! Maybe you could come over, if you want that is.



Would love to! But aren’t the boys there? What will they say when they see 'a stranger girl in Louis' bedroom'?



Don’t worry babe, they wont see you. I'm really sneaky, and they wont come into my room anyway! They never do, so I don’t think it would be a problem. And if they do, we could just hide you! :D



Yeah, the 'sneaky guy' who snuck out and got caught by his best mates? Real sneaky Lou.



Oh whatever! Just get your pretty face over here! I miss you! Oh and come up the fire escape so that you can sneak in my window so that the boys don’t see you ok?



Ok, ok. I'm  on my way, see you soon boobear!




See you here babe!



I finished texting Rachel, and fixed up a bit to look good for Rachel. I styled my hair a bit, and changed into sweats instead of the boxer shorts I was wearing. I lay down on my back on the bed, and stared up at the ceiling waiting for Rachel.


Soon enough, I heard my window open, and the cool London air rushed in. I sat up on my bed and saw Rachel sneaking in through the window, she looked like a thief coming in. She was a thief, a thief that stole my heart (A/N haha! See what I did there?). Cheesy, I know, but I'm in such a giddy mood right now. She saw me and smiled, then crossed over to sit on my bed.


"Hey babe!" she greeted me, then gave me a quick peck on the lips. She sat in front of me, cross legged on the bed, and we just stared into each others eyes for quite some time. A couple moments passed of us just staring at each other, then the next thing I know, I find myself leaning in, and she's mimicking my actions. And soon our lips met. I kissed her passionately, her lips felt soft and warm against mine, it was perfect. We moved in sync, I placed my hands on her hips, picked her up and placed her on my lap. Her legs were on both sides of my body, and she wrapped her arms around my neck, pulling me closer to her. I felt her hands tangle in my hair, pulling slightly at the roots. We were going to keep going, that is until I heard a knock on the door.


"Hey Lou, can we come in? We gotta talk about band practice now." Liam spoke from the other side of the door. Rachel immediately pulled away at the sound of his voice. Her eyes were wide, and she mouthed to me, 'where should I hide?'. We jumped off the bed, and scrambled to find a hiding place for Rachel.


"Ok, were coming in Lou." Harry announced. Rachel and I panicked and searched harder to find a hiding place. I heard the door handle turn, then click open, and soon the door was inching open. I turned around and faced the boys at the door way.


"Oh, Hi." I greeted them flustered.


A/N hope you guys like this chapter! I left another cliff hanger, I'm  so evil! >:) anyways, I decided to include a short makeout scene, its been a while since Louis and Rachel showed some action anyway. Please VOTE, COMMENT AND SUBSCRIBE!! Thanks for reading! Next chapters on Friday! Btw, I updated early cuz I just felt like it. :P and you guys gave me some great feed back, thanks for that! :D



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