My Immortal Comentary

This is a commentary of the infamous My Immortal. Do not own (thank god) Note! Swearing, cutting, bad lemons and horrible grammar. The last two are grave offences


10. Level Up!

Chapter 10.


AN: stup it u gay fags You like yaoi and yet you call us fags if u donot lik ma story den fukk off! ps it turnz out b’loody mary isn’t a muggle afert al n she n vampire r evil datz y dey movd houses ok! You sound retarded, never mind that’s an insult to those with mental disabilities sorry (NOT TO YOU EBONY SUE!)


I was really scared about Vlodemort all day. Who wouldn’t be?  I was even upset went to rehearsals with my gothic metal band Bloody Gothic Rose 666.No fucking way! I love them……NOT  I am the lead singer of it and I play guitar. People say that we sound like a cross between GC, Slipknot and MCR .Now I don’t want to hear any of those bands.  The other people in the band are B’loody Mary, Vampire, Draco, Ron (although we call him Diabolo now Why? Just why? (-/_-). He has black hair now with blue streaks in it.) and Hargrid. Only today Draco and Vampire were depressed so they weren’t coming and we wrote songs instead. I knew Draco was probably slitting his wrists (he wouldn’t die because he was a vampire too and the only way you can kill a vampire is with a c-r-o-s-s (there’s no way I’m writing that) or a steak  *looks at what the idiot said* MOM DO WE HAVE STEAK? ‘Why?’ I want to kill a Mary Sue vampire witch. ‘Where is she?’ In the computer. ‘You’re an idiot!’ IM SORRY MOMMY!)  and Vampire was probably watching a depressing movie like The Corpse Bride That movie fucking rocks thank you >:P. I put on a black leather shirt that showed off my boobs and tiny matching miniskirt that said Simple Plan on the butt. SLUT! You might think I’m a slut but I’m really not. BULLSHIT I CALL BULLSHIT ON THE SLUT!

We were singing a cover of ‘Helena’ and at the end of the song I suddenly bust into tears.

“Ebony! Are you OK?” B’loody Mary asked in a concerted voice. What. The. Fuck. do you think?

“What the fuck do you think?” I asked angrily. Called it *3* And then I said. “Well, Voldemort came and the fucking bastard told me to fucking kill Harry! But I don’t want to kill him, because, he’s really nice, even if he did go out with Draco. But if I don’t kill Harry, then Voldemort, will fucking kill Draco!” I burst into tears. Nice use of the word fuck. with your lemon skills you have made it obvious you are in middle school. 6th grader

Suddenly Draco jumped out from behind a wall. DAFUQ?

“Why didn’t you fucking tell me!” he shouted. “How could you- you- you fucking poser muggle bitch!” (c is dat out of character?) Congrats, your boyfriend is a stalker \( ._.) I’m don’t with you and your bitchy secrets, suck a cock

I started to cry and cry. Draco started to cry too all sensitive. Then he ran out crying. Now I have a suicidal Draco on my hands, thanks a lot Ebony or whatever your fucking name is now.


We practiced for one more hour. Then suddenly Dumbeldore walked in angrily! His eyes were all fiery and I knew this time it wasn’t cause he had a headache. Is he smioking crack? I would too if I had you as a student.

“What have you done!” He started to cry wisely. I don’t even- (c dats basically nut swering and dis time he wuz relly upset n u wil c y) “Ebony Draco has been found in his room. He committed suicide by slitting his wrists.” Ebony, you are now a grade A bitch, congrats on the level up.

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