My Immortal Comentary

This is a commentary of the infamous My Immortal. Do not own (thank god) Note! Swearing, cutting, bad lemons and horrible grammar. The last two are grave offences


4. Chapter 4

Chapter 4.

AN: I sed stup flaming ok ebony’s name is ENOBY nut mary su Wow, that was such a fail I don’t know where to begin. How many times have I insulted her intelligence? It’s probably not enough yet.  OK! DRACO IS SOO IN LUV wif her dat he is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!


“DRACO!” I shouted. “What the fuck do you think you are doing?” Uh, driving your ass around?

Draco didn’t answer but he stopped the flying car and he walked out of it. I walked out of it too, curiously. He might rape you, you know?

“What the fucking hell?” I asked angrily. Watch your fucking language missy!

“Ebony?” he asked.

“What?” I snapped.

Draco leaned in extra-close and I looked into his gothic red eyes (he was wearing color contacts) which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness and then suddenly I didn’t feel mad anymore. You, my bitchy whore, are a masochist. You are not welcome to the club get the fuck out.

And then…………… suddenly just as I Draco kissed me passionately. …was there togue?  Draco climbed on top of me and we started to make out keenly against a tree. He took of my top and I took of his clothes. I even took of my bra. Then he put his thingie into my you-know-what and we did it for the first time. THAT SINGLEHANDEDLY THE WORST FUCKING LEMON I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And trust me, I have read some pretty bad ones but this takes the cake.

“Oh! Oh! Oh! ” I screamed. I was beginning to get an orgasm. You cannot just “begin to get an orgasm” ‘snot possible. It’s like beginning to kill someone, you either did it or you didn’t.

We started to kiss everywhere and my pale body became all warm. If you were cold before you should have put a fucking jacket on. Don’t just resort to horrible sex to stay warm, even if it does do that and works better as a pain reliever. (fact) And then….


It was…………………………………………………….Dumbledore! Cock blocked by an old man, thank fucking god.



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