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amelia has never been exactly normal. she never knew her parents. they died when she was 2 though does not have any memory of them at all. she lived with her grandparents ever since. Her life was well... okay compared to most, only if you count her freaky magical power thing as normal.
everything changed when her grandparents died 2 years ago. she was sent to live in an orphanage that was mostly filled with boys and her most trustworthy companion/social worker silvia.

she was running. but not aware of what she was running from. amelia finds her self in a different place, and uncovers secrets that have been hidden for too long. she is a part of a new family who are putting there lives at risk for her and her newly found twin brother.
she finds out about her twin and the for told prophecy that could put the never ending wars of hatred away or it could create deaths of many innocent people.
the lives of many rely on thembut will the be succesful or will be solers be victorious?

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1. mystery hero

this is the first chapter of my movella! i was so nervous  putting it up but with some encouragement from my friends i finally pressed the publish button. please read and tell me what you think about it. if you find any mistakes or anything just tell and i will try and improve it to your liking :)

i know the description sounds cheesy... but just give it a try and if you dont like it its all cool dude life goes on.

thankyouuu here it is, hope you enjoy :)

prologue

Life’s a wonderful thing. Unknown to mysteries, not even the human kind can solve. Isn’t it ironic how the human race understands war and tragedy more than love and peace? I reckon it’s got something to do with the media or is it just there natural instinct? At times my mind seems to wander away from the truth because I find it too hard to believe. Our troubles and heat aches need to stop now. We have felt enough emotions and loss. The world needs to learn that destruction and pain only leads to more hatred but who am I to question the laws of past generations? I maybe young but knowledge of the past and presents swarm through my head like and endless storm. If only i could figure out a way to unlock myself. If only i could be like him. Maybe then, we would stand a chance. Maybe then the earth would finally rest.

 

chapter 1

I ran as fast as my lungs dared. Thick branches ripped through the tanned skin on my arm like an eagle’s claw. My heart beat increased with every sprint, every breath thought to be my last. The armoured moon hovered its white light around me, hauntingly. A strange sensation of comfort stopped me in my tracks. Where am i? Why am I trying to get away? A storm of unanswered questions rang in my mind. The anxiety of confusion hit me as i leaned back against an ancient tree. Shadows seemed to overwhelm my vision as I tried to get a better look of my surroundings. I found myself standing in the middle of a spooky forest which only increased the nausea I felt in the pit of my stomach.

 I shut my eyes hoping for it all to be a nightmare or maybe even a parallel dream. The sound of crunching leaves woke my rarely found contentment. My body instantly locked to defence mode. Living in a house full of active boys made me less weak and innocent than my face revealed. Guess that’s one of the advantages I’ve had since I moved in to the Greenhill orphanage, 5 years ago.

Someone was here. I could sense a living creature from at least a mile away. I opened my eyes slowly, contemplating my next move. The unknown was staring right at me. Kind brown eyes bore in to mine, revealing all my deepest, darkest secrets; literally. For some reason I couldn’t look away. The imaginary wall that I built up seemed to have crumbled. “Who are you” I whispered. My head was overflowing with strange emotions, I wasn’t familiar with. His face stayed expressionless as he cocked his head to the side like he was in deep thought. “No need to be afraid Amelia, I have been sent here to help you... please don’t be frightened” he urged. I was puzzled by the sound of his calm but understanding voice. He seemed so casual like it was normal to find a girl wearing pink Winnie the Pooh pyjamas running through a forest in the middle of the night! Freaky.

A weird feeling of composure tickled through my fingertips. I couldn’t help but gasp at the tingling vibes. He smiled at me knowingly. The strange feeling instantly turned to full ecstasy. A small sigh escaped my parched lips. I was free of all worries and painful thoughts. It felt like a huge boulder had been finally lifted off my chest, free of all distress and weakness. My eyes rolled to the back of my head. Exhaustion was threatening to take over. I tried to walk but I tripped over a strayed thick twig covered by dry leaves. Before I even took in what was happening, I was caught by firm but gentle hands as darkness overtook me.

 

 

so what do you guyz think? is it good? pleaseee tell me so i can see if i should carryon or just change everthing. i know it was quite short but i promise the next chapters will be longer.

thankyou soo much for reading my first chapter! it means a lot to me.

 

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