loved you first- a harry styles fan-fict (vampire)

Adriana Madrigal, an 18 year old girl who doesn't have any luck with the guys. But when she gets into a car accident will she find her true love...? what will happen. She will find out dark secrets.

Adriana's parents died in a car accident a year and a half ago but she still misses them and loves her parents with all her heart. Adriana is an only child. she has two cousins that live with her and their names are nevaeh and paula. They are the sisters she never had.

Adriana loves listening to one direction. Her cousin's and her made a plan to go to a 1D concert and hope to get lucky and met the guys. Adriana is a shy, loveing and caring person, if someone gets her mad she will defend herself. Adriana works at starbucks. Well she is on her way for an interview and she hopes she gets the job. She's mexican/puerto rican. She currently lives in California


1. Chapter 1


Ok hear goes my first fan-fict I hope you guys like it. Let me know what you guys think. PLEASE if you have advise on how I should write my story please tell me i'm new at this and i'm just getting the hang of things. vote/fan/comment if you like,  and it let me know if I should continue it or not because I dont want people reading it if they don't like it. I dont know any british terms or other stuff and I dont know how they actually act or think so i'm sorry im trying my best. 


Harry's POV:

I'm on my way to starbucks when I came to a cross walk. I am wearing my one direction detection disguise, hoping for no one to recognize me. As I looked I saw the most gorgeous girl. I wanted to go and talk to her but of course she was in her car, so I just smiled and waved at her she saw me and just smiled and waved back and giggled which I found very cute. I'm waited for these cars to go by so I can get to starbucks and get my caramel mocha I've been wanting all morning.

Adriana's POV:

I was on my way to starbucks for a  job interview , I stopped at a red light and I saw this cute guy he was wearing a green polo and dark blue jeans he had lots of curls, I just wanted to put my hand though it. He smiled and waved at me so I smiled and waved back. I giggled because he had dark shades and a very big mustache that you can OBVIOUSLY tell it was fake. hmm... I wonder why he had those on. 

Call from: Nevaeh_boo<3

Loved you first started playing since it was my ringtone. I lowered the volume of the music I was listening to before picking up.

"hey gurl!! Paula and I are at starbucks right now. Were waiting to get interviewed. I hope they let all three of us work together its going to be so much fun!!" Nevaeh said with excitement. "where are you right now?"

"I'm on my way right now, i'm at a red light as we speak. I just need to make a right turn and then i'm there." I said  "I hope they all let us work there its going to be great!!"

"Ok, Ill let you go now so you can get here faster, its almost your turn. Paula just went in." Nevaeh said.

"Alright see you soon. Bye!" 

I hung up getting ready to start driving again.

Harry's POV:

As I was getting ready to continue walking I heard a loud crashing sound. I turn around in time to see the girl I just waved to a couple minutes ago get hit by a car. I quickly ran to help her out the car when I saw that her head was bleeding and she was just lying there motionless. I opened her car door and took her seat belt off  and I picked her up and grabbed her iphone. I ran to the sidewalk and layed her there and took my phone and called a ambulance. I then grabbed her phone and hopped for it not to be locked. I slide the bar and it opened. thank god. I looked who was her last call and it was two minutes ago. I quickly called that person back hopng for a reply as i heard the ambulance coming.

Nevaeh's POV:

I'm pationatly waiting for my turn for the interview when my phone began to ring. I looked at the caller Id and it was Adriana. hmm.. why is she calling when we just talked three minutes ago.

"hey wha-" I was interupted by someone else on the phone.

"Eermm.. sorry your friend just got into a car accident and-" he said as I cutt him off.

"OMG! is she ok where is she!!" I said terrified of what could of happened to her. I was just talking to her and she was perfectly fine.

"She looks like she is going be fine but she has a cut on her head and probably a broken arm. were on our way to the hospital right now." he said 

 We I thought confused "thank you for calling im on my way." maybe he's coming to see how she is, after all he helped her out I guess...

"No problem" he said then I hung up.

Just in time Paula came out and I told her what happened. I told the store manager if I could come back another time because of what just happened and he said yes but I can't get out of next time. I thanked him and we ran out on our way to the hospital.


I hope you guys liked it let me know what you thought. comment/vote/fan 

this is my first fan-fict so im sorry again for any errors or anything. sorry if it was short.

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