Apart of me was missing (finished)

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  • Published: 29 Sep 2012
  • Updated: 13 Oct 2012
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imagine one day waking up and everythings normal, next minute your favorite boyband turning up at your door, only to find out when you meet them that one of them was your sibling, but who? how did it happen? and what happens next? youll have to read on to find out :) enjoy :) and please comment, critism or nice comments but please no hate, this is my first ever fan fiction, sorry if its rubbish though :)


40. The town hall

Louis's point of view

I got up at 10:00 am and I thought, wow i'm going to find my sister I was still in shock, I had a shower and got ready, at 10:30 I woke Daisy and Phoebe up, they got up and got changed, Laura woke up next and asked "you excited for today, maybe finding out where your sister is or at least what your sister's name is" "yea i'm excited but nervous at the same time, I just want to find her, I want to know what she looks like and whether she would like  me and my family" I said shakily "she will, whats not to like, your funny, kind, caring, amazing, a great singer and need I go on, and well your family are just the same and more to, who wouldn't love you" she replied and i was a bit calmer "aw thanks Laura, your so sweet"  I hugged her, and so at 11:230 we got called to have our breakfast so we did, we had a talk and a drink, by 12:00 pm we we're ready to set out "are you two ready" I asked Daisy and Phoebe "yesss" they both replied with glee "good luck" Lottie, Fizzy, my mum and Laura said in unison, they were really exited to see if we could find our sister same with Daisy, Phoebe and me, while we was in the car Daisy asked "do you think we'll find her"  "I don't know but I hope so" I replied, i really wanted to say yes but I couldn't give them false hope so we arrived at the town hall and went to the desk, Daisy and Phoebe was dancing around because of the excitement "guys, this is a formal place, please don't make a noise" I said as nicely as I could "ok we're sorry bro" they said, aw there so cute, so they settled down, I went to the desk and as soon as I got there, all I got was 'oh my word it's Louis Tomlinson from one direction; "yes I know, please I need help" I said politely "oh i'm sorry, how may I help you" he said apologetically "I only found out yesterday that I had a sister that was kidnapped at birth, please could you see if you have any records of her, I really want to find her" I must have sounded really desperate but I was, "ok what was her name, the date and the year she was born and where" he asked her name was Jodie Tomlinson, born 4th November 1994 and she was born in the only hospital in Doncaster " I replied "ok, let see, if we can find her, oh... here it is, but someone has changed her name, it doesn't say what to, oh wait ....... it  does, I can't see let me put my glasses on.... oh my word oops........ im sooooooo sorry " he said "what for" I firmly asked "well.... I...... uhhhh ........

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