The ring of distillation.

My story for the love competition :) <3 x

Roxanne and her best friend Georgia is faced with a criminal gang who want something Roxanne lost long ago. They both fall for the one they love and have make quick choices within their days to insure that their lives are safe. Roxanne's love is handsome and easy to fall for, what with those glimmering blue eyes and perfectly groomed blonde hair, but why does something in her head tell her to walk away and will her choices cause chios in her life?

A mixture of love, action, reality and choices!


12. Foiled again!

Adam tries his hardest to get back quickly without getting into trouble on the way back. We reach the empty flat and begin to panic even more now. Where is Georgia? My heart sits heavy as I look Adam in his eyes; he shrugs his shoulders which makes me even more agitated. Adam glances out of the window and sprints downstairs, I, of course, pursue behind him.

A white Carrera Porsche sits outside of the flats. Adam knocks on the window and it slowly opens as a man is revealed inside. He puts his hand out as a gesture that he wants the ring.

“Where is she?” I blurt.

“She is very safe with some friends, your man should know them, I will make this simple for you, give me the ring and I will get them to release her!” He instructs in his fluent Spanish accent.

I look closer in his eyes as Adam moves the ring closer to him. He trembles. His greedy eyes fix onto the shimmering diamonds. Then it hits me! I grab the ring off Adam, Arden’s view is completely cut off and a confused look falls onto his face.

“I have your friend.” He reminds me.

“I don’t think you do!” I conflict, “I think you made the whole thing up, don’t you? I think you don’t have Georgia, I think it is a coincident that she’s gone, I think if you had gone into my flat to get her, you would have broke in, and not took the time to lock the door back up,” Arden tries to speak but my detective instincts kick in again, “I think your plan was to make out you have Georgia, get the ring and get out quick before we have a chance to figure out what has just happened when Georgia returns, oblivious to what we are talking about.” He looks at Adam in shock as his plan is foiled once again by me.

We all look to our right as we hear the sound of crutches. Georgia struggles down the street, unaware that we are all watching her.

“And there is my proof!” I point out to him.

“Well, I can see you won’t give me the ring right now, but don’t think I won’t be back!” Arden promises.

“If I was you, I wouldn’t bother, the ring is being sold and I won’t have it, be sure you tell all your friends, okay? How we would put it in England, don’t waste your time and certainly don’t waste mine!”

He moans, knowing he has been beaten! He starts his engine, puts his window back up and drives off hastily.

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