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I like to write stories.

  • Okay,Okay
    6 лет назадОтветить
    Hey :) So I think the idea of this story is good and you can really go far with it. One of the main points though is you should maybe use speech marks around the speech to make it more clear when a character is talking, and to split up the paragraphs. So each time there is new speech do it on a new line so that your story can be read more easily! :)
    Just Another Ordinary Girl
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    Vanessa had never loved she had never been loved. She's moved from place to place toon to town all her life. All she has ever known was rejection, from here mother from her father from boys, girls even...
    zayn'sgurl
    6 лет назад
    Ok thanks for the advice i hope this does go far we shall see i guess (fingers crossed) thanks again it means a lot
  • Okay,Okay
    7 лет назадОтветить
    Aw Draco :) And since when did Seamus and Harry like her?haha
    Pure-Blood Gryffindor
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    Jamie-Leigh, or Jamie to her friends, has got a new letter. She usually only gets letters from her dad. She's classes herself as smart and she studies for tests that shes not even sure will happen soon....
    ~TheWolfBornPrincess~
    7 лет назад
    No idea i put it in because of the potions class when Harry ignored her but she never found out why and because of when she got in the Quiditch team they got closer. I added Seamus because i think his accent is way too cute :) xx
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