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  • Aeria

    mumbled "Finished Novel"

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    Completely finished the first novelof my series, The Elder Scrolls: Unbound. Go read now! :D
  • Aeria

    mumbled "Can you guys review a poem? "

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    Do you guys mind looking at a poem I have? I wrote it on a spontaneous thing and I don't know what to do now...
    Smol_Space_Cadet
    3 лет назад
    i'll look at it!
    Aeria
    3 лет назад
    Really? Awesome! Okay, this is it:


    WHISPER

    I cannot speak

    My mind does

    But my lips never move



    They say I am too shy, too stupid, too smart

    The rumours are abuzz

    with these lies



    They say I am scared, anxious, neglected

    Money burned on useless info because

    I can not speak

    I will not speak



    I am yelled at

    I am screamed to

    I am complained about

    to everyone who isn't really willing

    to listen



    They give me pills and give me liquids

    Others

    give me rolls of greenish-brownish things

    And bottles of rusty drinks

    But they all say

    the same thing



    "This will fix your problem"



    But I know they mean

    ME

    and not my

    VOICE



    They believe I am sick I am stupid I am numb

    They think they will

    fix

    me



    Everyone

    thinks

    they can

    fix

    me

    but

    am

    I

    really

    broken

    I

    say

    I'm

    not

    but

    they

    don't

    listen



    .....



    ...but...

    ...YOU...

    ..can see..

    that I'm not..

    who they call..

    I am a

    doll

    with

    a

    chipped

    cheek

    but

    you

    say

    it is

    painted blush



    YOU

    understand

    you say over as we sit under the oak by the park



    Others wait in silence

    and others sit and stare

    and others talk as if I'm not there



    But you

    wait for me to answer



    YOU

    who doesn't know but is willing to learn



    You

    who sits by me at lunch when

    I usually am

    alone



    You

    who sings to me

    when I'm anxious at night

    over the phone



    You

    who draws and creates with pen and pencil

    for me



    You

    a work of art

    of hair and eyes and lips and nose



    So when we sit

    by the old oak tree

    under the old wood thing

    with my head on your lap

    and I think you

    are asleep

    Your eyes flutter and your mouth parts slightly

    to breathe

    And I smile

    and I finally whisper





    Thanks.
    Asteria Grace
    3 лет назад
    :'O That is just wow. Amazing. XD Sorry, /I/ am no good at reviewing poetry XD But this is amazing!!
  • Aeria

    mumbled "why..."

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    okay, so everyone I text seems to just love this---> (x3) face and idk why. I mean, it's just a face xD

    People are weird.













    x3
    Aeria
    3 лет назад
    Ikr xD
    Asteria Grace
    3 лет назад
    x3 It's awesome XD
  • Aeria

    mumbled "Too Much For An Anthology?"

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    Is (are?) 25 entries of stories too much for an anthology? Most are poems and one page short stories, though I don't want to bore my readers...
    Chloe_
    3 лет назад
    Hi, you'll be giving to Caza for the movellas gift exchange. Here's the link to their profile movellas.com/user/caza All names have been sorted randomly so if you are giving to a friend it is completely coincidental. Please send your gift to me by the 15th of December. Thanks. :)
  • Aeria

    mumbled "FINISHED"

    3 лет назадОтветить
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    THAT EUORPHIC FEELING YOU GET WHEN YOU FINSIH A 50,000 WORD NOVEL
    (That's a bit of sadness due to the fact you forgot to update NaNoWriMos novel word count)

    AHHHHHH!!!!










    now we need to edit...
    Raven711
    3 лет назад
    Congratulations :D
    Asteria Grace
    3 лет назад
    Congrats!! :D