MulherMembro desde 31 mai 12Idade 19Última conexão há 7 anos atrás

I love writing, especially poems, feel free to ask me to write a poem or story about a particular topic, mothers day, fathers day, birthday, Christmas e.t.c. If you only have chance to look at one of my Movellas, choose What Am I? it is a collection of tough easy riddles.

  • Who am I?
    Who am I?
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    Quotes
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  • Turns out different
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  • Jemma
    há 7 anos atrásResponder
    Its nice i just think you need to relook at it, words like ya and capital letters!
    True Love
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    I went to the mall with my best friend, Sara. I hate One Direction, but my Sara loves them so i constantly have to tell her to be quiet. So we always fight about how bad/good One Direction. We arn't really...
  • Jemma
    há 8 anos atrásResponder
    A lovely start to this story. I absolutley love the story ideas. I think that for the next few chapters, you could try and add in a few comparisons(similies), metaphors and a wider variety of connectives. I love your descriptive words and although it sounds weird, i like the way you called it a megaphone instead of a microphone and others. The level of discription is top class, lots of people either of describe or under, but this is perfect. Well done, you have a real talent for writing.
    Teeth
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    5 thugs. 1 bite. A nation of Death.
  • Jemma
    há 8 anos atrásResponder
    As promised.... I love the use of elipses, however a wider varity of punctuation would be nice. If you could describe most things in more detail. Love the ending, makes it very dramatiocal. It would be even better if you could adapt it slightly to make a sequel. I like your variety of sentence types. Well done, you have a real talent.
    Safralia
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    Huhum... My entry for the fantasy comp Hope you like. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I am not normal in this world. In this world I am accompanied by dragons,...
  • Jemma
    há 8 anos atrásResponder
    Just noticed a slight grammatical mistake on the first line, first paragraph, instead of weren't boring, I think that it is wasn't boring. I'm not sure, it just doesn't sound right! I really like your style of writing and the way you say things the way that I would. Would love to see a sequel to this story as it is written really well. On a couple of paragraphs, try to remember the rule - you change paragraph every time the time, topic, place or person changes. But other than that, well done!
    The School Girl Who Faced The Bully!
    The School Girl...
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    This is a story about a School Girl called Kessy, She lives on a boat, Travelling everywhere with her mum Katie and her dad Bouncer. They do everything together, They go fishing on Sunday's and Aquarium...
  • Jemma
    há 8 anos atrásResponder
    As promised.... I love this story and the way it is written. Really liked this and how the story is portrayed and the language that you use is phenomenol! I am so pleased with your grammar and spelling in this story because authors often make mistakes(me included!) Loved it, you have a real talent!
    The Secrets of Capricorn
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    If he had the choice between changing a single person’s life and changing the world, what would he choose? If it means giving up all that he’s ever loved, would he really take that place for the one person...
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