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Welcome,

I've indeed made my long overdue return from my mayhem. In all honesty I never believed I'd return, I've overcome struggles within my personal life and I can finally say that I'm at a point in my life where I am content with the direction it is heading towards. If I am being completely open I lost my passion for writing within the midst of my personal troubles, however I think I am at place where I can now continue to write without forcing it.

I am going to be reworking some of my old novels that I left behind, as well as releasing a variety of new works that I have come to focus on.

Constructive criticism is appreciated massively on my Movellas - so please give me notice of any mistakes, or just what you liked/disliked about my writing. I also give constructive criticism; if you need any just comment below!

Thanks for all the support.
-E.H

  • E.H. Weaver

    mumbled "Sixth Form Is Taking Over My Life..."

    há 6 meses atrásResponder
    I apologise for my lack (understatement) of activity recently. xD
    Sixth form is literally taking over my life, from university applications, coursework, exam preparation, etc.
    Regret not taking part in NaNoWriMo - like I had the time anyway... xD
    Anyway, how is everyone? Any one want me to take a look at any recent work?
    Also, I'm going to try to do some writing over the next few weeks, I again for apologise for the delay in the upload of my novel Impure.
    -E.H
    Midnight Rogue
    há 6 meses atrás
    1 Like
    I'm doing Social Psychology :) it's three modules of sociology and three modules of psychology. Going to try to go into working with teenagers and their mental health.
    Lily Anna
    há 6 meses atrás
    Ooh, sounds good! We need more mental health specialists for teenagers, it's really important.
    Midnight Rogue
    há 6 meses atrás
    1 Like
    For sure :D I'm really enjoying the course so far and I'm looking forward to more.
  • E.H. Weaver

    mumbled "Just a quick update..."

    há 8 meses atrásResponder
    1 Like
    So, yes I have been slightly...extremely inactive these past two weeks.
    Just explaining that this is due to a large amount of sixth form work, I feel as though it is literally going to swallow me up, yet what makes it worse is that I continue to procrastinate and now I am behind.
    I did say that I was going to release my new upcoming novel, but I want to ensure that I have properly read it over. I apologise for the delay. xD
    -E.H
    Lily Anna
    há 8 meses atrás
    That's okay! In your own time. :)
    I'm already crammed with uni work and it's only been 1 week so far :/ I haven't written anything but a few blog posts.
  • E.H. Weaver

    mumbled "Updates"

    há 9 meses atrásResponder
    1 Like
    So my initial plan was to release Impure this weekend, however I have been extremely busy with prep for my last year of sixth form and I haven't even started all the essays that are due in yet. Typical me. xD

    Due to this I am not quite sure when I am hoping to release it, but I plan to get my essays done by tomorrow and hopefully then I can focus on finishing a few of the chapters to release it.

    -E.H
    Lily Anna
    há 9 meses atrás
    1 Like
    Can't wait to read! :) But it's important to focus on school work, so take all the time you need.
    E.H. Weaver
    há 9 meses atrás
    1 Like
    Thank you, and completely I have so much to do! :)
  • E.H. Weaver

    mumbled "Impure - TEASER"

    há 9 meses atrásResponder
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    I've decided to release a section of my novel Impure as a teaser for the release!
    I would really appreciate any feedback or thoughts anybody may have, as it would be much appreciated! I'm currently working on a few chapters just so that the process of releasing it chapter by chapter isn't extremely delayed and so that it doesn't come to a complete halt - hopefully.
    So here is a section so far:

    'Piercing shrieks bounced wall from wall, binding the helpless sorrows of those forgotten to linger in the deserted hallways. An endless labyrinth of bolted doorways that locked the fate of those diagnosed without sanity. Rustic, steel doorways jolted forwards and backwards as helpless souls charged at them attempting to regain their freedom, although each one knew it was pointless. Infinite hallways confirmed the uncertainty in the conspiracies that anyone would ever escape the institute. Emerging from the shadows of the infinite hallway a silhouette gradually morphed into the structure of a petite girl, with porcelain skin that once complimented the bone structure of her face, once lustrous, chestnut waves now neglected, straggly tatters. Salted tears streamed down the girl’s face contributing to the past pool of tears from other despairing individuals that have stained the floors with melancholy. Glistening, blood-shot, emerald green eyes glazed around the room showing emptiness and emotionless, confirming that the girl had withdrawn herself from the present into a time when she was once some what happy. Lugged down the hallway, whimpering as her legs lagged behind her, thumping against the tiled floor each time she was hurled up to be rebalanced.
    Her mind had become her own imprisonment.'

    -E.H
    E.H. Weaver
    há 9 meses atrás
    1 Like
    Haha, thank you very much a review would be much appreciated! Hopefully releasing it over the weekend, just very busy at the minute. :)
    3 SECOND LUKE
    há 9 meses atrás
    @[E.H. Weaver] Anytime. Hey, if you ever get some time to read my latest story BROTHERS- I would love to read your comment / review / feedback. Sorry if I worded that weirdly, I'm kind of in a rush as I've got to go out for a few hours.
    E.H. Weaver
    há 9 meses atrás
    @[3 SECOND LUKE] I will possibly tonight, if I get a chance? I'll definitely give some feedback too! :)
  • E.H. Weaver
    há 9 meses atrásResponder
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    So I'm no expert with constructive criticism, obviously. So if anything I say that you don't agree with please just tell me, because of course you're widening my knowledge too!
    I've only read the first chapter so far but it is a fantastic start!
    The choice of wording and tone really gives off a Victorian Era which of course is an essential aspect in historical fiction.
    Personally, for me, within the first paragraph I feel as though there are too many commas. This could just be my opinion though and for others it might flow. I hope you didn't mind me pointing this out to you, perhaps you could try to use a variety of punctuation rather than commas or breaking down sentences more. Although, as I have pointed out this could just be my personal preference.

    Overall, I really enjoyed reading the first paragraph and when I have more time I will try to return to continue from a fantastic start to what I'm sure will continue to be fantastic.
    -E.H
    Beth
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    Beth Emmerson may be rich, but she doesn't have everything; her father thinks she's proud and her distant cousin, Gordon Banks, clearly hates her enough to appear cold and distant. But when a strange poem...
    Eileen Prince
    há 9 meses atrás
    Thank you so much! I will definitely reread the first paragraph again and chech if it does flow. But a massive thanks for the comment! :)
    E.H. Weaver
    há 9 meses atrás
    No worries, I hope I did help at least. Fantastic start though! :)
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