MulherUnited StatesMembro desde 7 mar 16Última conexão há 2 dias atrás

A writer, singer, fangirl, and lover of all things fantasy

Hello, and thanks for looking at my stories! I love comments, and the more people tell me to update, the sooner I'll update. I love people telling me what they think, even if it's constructive criticism. Hey, if you want to help make my work better, be my guest. I don't like hate comments, but there's nothing I can do about them so if you hate my stories I'm sorry.


**Winner of Red Queen competition with Steel Queen**
**Winner of Replica competition with Ascendence**

Gems of Movellas 2- When The World Falls To Darkness

por , Domingo Outubro 30, 2016
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Gems of Movellas 2- When The World Falls To Darkness

Second entry for the blogging competition

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  • Dragon rider fangirl

    mumbled "Mass purge"

    So as this says, there will be a mass purge of my work. A lot of it, except for my favorites, will be off for a bit. This probably won't matter, but I'm just adding this in case anybody cares.
  • Dragon rider fangirl
    So here's my CC, as promised!

    So the world was a little confusing. I didn't really get where it was, or what was happening. After a bit, I sorted through it and started to figure it out. This is only the start, I'm sure, so I'm interested to see where it goes.

    Okay, characters. I really liked them! I loved Rowan's sass, even in the face of death. He was really brave. Also, their terror and confusion was so well written! It was to the point where I was feeling just as freaked out, hoping they weren't going to die. When the guy said he was going to kill Rowan, I may have had a moment of panic. I'm glad they're still alive. I also like how after Rowan was threatened he stopped being sassy, and then started again. Usually characters are either quiet and scared or snarky, but Rowan was a mix of both, and I appreciated that.

    I didn't really get the whole face appearing in a tree thing. I couldn't tell if that was literal or metaphorical. Their escape was also a bit confusing.

    Overall, though, this is a very good story, with interesting characters and concepts. I have no idea where they are or how they got there, but I'm excited to read more!
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    ‘They’d just wanted to go to a party.’ Calla and Rowan Laurel love their kingdom. East of the Norberg mountains, Saharm lies dormant, far from the revolution and turmoil of the West. But when the Laurels...
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    Thank you! :)
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