MulherUnited KingdomMembro desde 16 mar 14Última conexão há 3 anos atrás

Sometimes I'm here.

  • NotveryCommon
    há 3 anos atrásResponder
    This is so good Vick. Just an error in chapter five. Its lose not loose. Loose is like something that's dangling or less sturdy. Not on something dproperly basically. 5/5 so far!! It is an amazing story and you have planned it really well! X
    Hiding Lies
    Hiding Lies
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    "The heart should decide what it wants, but at times, you need to ignore it and follow your head. Or follow the car." // Leah Rouge, a girl set on what she wants with her heart claimed by someone who wants...
    Victoria Raven
    há 3 anos atrás
    Thank you!

    I'm hoping to re-write the entire thing, same characters, same plot but longer and with more detail and more realistic.
    NotveryCommon
    há 3 anos atrás
    No its amazing already! Btw its Amy! X
  • NotveryCommon
    há 4 anos atrásResponder
    Book review:
    Fantastic writing skills. Kept realism throughout. to improve this maybe add more describing words. use sensed like sound or smell. describe them.
    Clash Of Elements
    Clash Of Elements
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    In a world were magic is widespread and people are able to use it since childhood, a certain teenager lives in a small village. On his sixteenth Birthday Alexander Fairchild goes to the annual ceremony...
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