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If I had to live by the words I wrote I would either be a mermaid, an Alien Princess, a superpowered heroine or a desperate detective.

Avengers: Endgame Review

por , Sábado Maio 11, 2019
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Avengers: Endgame Review

If you haven't seen the film and want to I advise looking away


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  • Katie Pharoah
    há 4 minutos atrásResponder
    This is great, I love the description and the lore is just picking up with the fourth chapter. I have a few CC points; in the very first chapter I would suggest to just say she screamed instead of having the "ahhh" to make the pace flow better, and in the fourth chapter I think 'sniffles' should just be 'sniffle'. Can't wait to read more though :)
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    Alexa Jones is a daughter of Werewolves and she has nothing but her strong sense of smell to show for it. She is incapable of shifting and hasn't met her wolf yet. The day she meets her mate, she...
  • Katie Pharoah
    há 1 semanas atrásResponder
    Oh, now this is interesting. That first line draws you in and the chapters chop back and forth which increases the mystery. The only CC I can offer is more description between dialogue to enhance the reader's experience and to drive the plot :)
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    When Nina Bentley was sixteen, there was an accident, and her dad died. His blood was on her hands when the police found her. She swore she didn't do it. No one believed her. But, as buried memories...
  • Katie Pharoah
    há 1 semanas atrásResponder
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    These are brilliant.
    CC; I think in the second poem it's meant to be ' too excited' but you've put 'exited' easy thing to fix. Looking forward to reading more :)
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    This is my English poetry collection. Here I’ll share poems, mostly about feelings Dette er min engelske digtsamling. Her vil jeg dele digte, mest omkring følelser.
    Cathrine-Dreamer
    há 1 semanas atrás
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    Thank you :) yes that must be a mistake. I’ll just fix it haha
  • Katie Pharoah

    mumbled "#MovellasGS-April-2019"

    há 2 semanas atrásResponder
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    @[SHABZY]
    FanArtThis is where I keep all of my art, based on different fandoms, and different Movellas (mine and other peoples). You can expect: Illustrations, Alterna...
    SHABZY
    há 2 semanas atrás
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    Omdz hey poem is beautiful!! Thank you soo much :) x
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