FemminaUnited StatesMembro da 24 giu 15Ultimamente online 11 months ago

Hey, I'm Natalia, Friends with SparksOfAction and sister of Acidic_Grape and Bianca007. I like to write with my friends, and we exchange stories. I'm glad I found this so I can do it with more people.

  • MintySilver
    You kept "Tay" in the last chapter, you need to change it to Nat
    The Little Mermaid (Mash-up)
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    The twins, Trent and Natalia, wake up one day to find themselves in... they aren't exactly sure where. And they also don't know how they got here. It is a land... sea, where mermaids swim and pirates attack....
    SparksOfAction
    4 years ago
    I know.
    I was too lazy to change it cuz im changing that part anyways.
    MintySilver
    4 years ago
    oh ok
  • MintySilver
    NO!!! don't name her after SOLI!!!!!
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    The twins, Trent and Natalia, wake up one day to find themselves in... they aren't exactly sure where. And they also don't know how they got here. It is a land... sea, where mermaids swim and pirates attack....
    SparksOfAction
    4 years ago
    I mean... she's got dat personality >EXAGGERATED WINKK" if ya know wut I mean??
    MintySilver
    4 years ago
    Ya but still. She doesn't deserve a spot in one of your books like that
    SparksOfAction
    4 years ago
    ok ima use someone else... who I don't reaalllyy know... how bout zofia.
  • MintySilver
    wait paragraph 2 is a copy of paragraph 1
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    The twins, Trent and Natalia, wake up one day to find themselves in... they aren't exactly sure where. And they also don't know how they got here. It is a land... sea, where mermaids swim and pirates attack....
  • MintySilver
    the beginning of the two first paragraphs in chapter 2 are the same
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    The twins, Trent and Natalia, wake up one day to find themselves in... they aren't exactly sure where. And they also don't know how they got here. It is a land... sea, where mermaids swim and pirates attack....
    SparksOfAction
    4 years ago
    I knowwww
    MintySilver
    4 years ago
    I said that then I kept reading and said the other thing lol sorry
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