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  • Dj_nialler69
    Oh my god this is so good t took me forever to read lmao, could you check out my fan fiction and gimme some advice to make it better thanks xx
    See Through
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    Olivia Adams isn't alive, but she isn't dead either. Somewhere between heaven and hell lies perpetual purgatory, and she's inevitably stuck in it. There's unfinished business to be tended to, but the question...
    M.J. Letner
    6 years ago
    Thank you! New chapters are up now :)
  • Dj_nialler69
    this is really good i love it!!!! could you read my fan fiction, maybe give me some advice on what to do to make it better, thanks xx
    Saria
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    Aurora Marane is a typical 17 year old girl who hasn't quite found the right guy yet. She doesn't like anyone, until she meets Zander. Zander is a mysterious and hot boy that catches Aurora's eye. But...
  • Dj_nialler69
    its good but you need to check your grammar. also when a new person is speaking, you need to put it on another line (enter) also you should work on your paragraphs, instead of making two or so big paragraphs you should make like 20 smaller paragraphs
    Skinny love
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    SKIN•NY LOVE "Forget the risk,and take the fall. If it's meant to be,then it worth it all." ----------------------------------------------- Rated pg-13 Content cuss words. Feel free...
  • Dj_nialler69
    LOVE IT UPDATE SOON!!!! could you check out my fan fiction and give me some criticism thanks love keep writing
    Through the Dark
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    This story is about a girl named Paige who gets teased at school. She loves soccer and has a crush on a guy she knew since she was young. She joins the soccer team to impress him and she's one of the best...
    Whomever You Please
    No problem! I'll update as soon a I can, it's just that I have semester exams this week, I will try soon!
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